The Waiting Game

From a derelict house, near the interstate pass,
with her cuff of chenille, she rubs a small circle 
to clear away grime from the cold window glass
Better to see now, beyond wooden rails, that have worn disrepair
for thirty odd years
and have fenced in, long hours of loneliness

There's an old pepper tree, that tosses it's head in an alien wind,
in a sea of dead grass, where a garden had been 
There's a face, weathered thin, from neglect and despair
she turns for a moment, to glance, here and there, 
a room she has known, filled with colors long dimmed,
where the silence shouts loud, not a question to ask....
but...wishing for something..., a chore, or a task
if only the phone might ring.....

Near the rail of the fence are two Rhode Island Reds
grazing around in the tall weedy grass
There's a cock on a post, in the shade of the tree
keeping watch on his kin, keeping her company, 
keeping tabs of a life that has come to an end
She will gaze in a lapse, dust motes fall to the floor,
in the still of the gloom she will turn once again
in the grim of the room...
There is still a dial tone, ....maybe the phone will ring....


For a mere month or more, a feral cat came her door
then had wandered the floors, neither friend or a foe
But he soon disappeared,  on the eve of the storm
She will call just the same.......just in case he can hear
"Here, kitty kitty"....."Here, kitty kitty", but she calls him in vain
While the wind plays the same dirty game...
Tumble weeds roll and bend, her eyes search through the wind
...as she waits for a friend
a friend never there....always due to arrive
so she stands by the side, of the black telephone
In the old parlor room, in the gloom of a long afternoon
Maybe the phone will ring....  




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October 23, 2013 at 8:10 PM
so gloomy... enjoyed your poem Carrie,awesome. LOVE -- SKAT
A   Avatar
October 22, 2013 at 10:12 PM
nice win Carrie...LINDA
Anglesey Avatar
October 22, 2013 at 2:52 PM
Such a compelling write saturated in loneliness. Reminders of the phone weaved into the many degrees of a such lonely life. Superb
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
October 21, 2013 at 12:22 PM
Heartbreaking story of loneliness, Carrie...congrats on your well-deserved first place win! Love and blessings, Rhonda...
Mehta Avatar
October 21, 2013 at 8:05 AM
Congrats on first place win, Carrie,
Adams Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 4:52 PM
you always paint the scenes so well and take us there through your words...another beauty from you...congrats on your win :)
Hamilton Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 2:13 PM
Carrie congrats on fine win Shadow x smile
Collins Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 9:31 AM
Dear Carrie - Oh the sadness, the loneliness. The continued hope in the cat, the phone. Checking for the dial tone. Somehow 'the cuff her chenille' struck me with a vivid picture. Bravo love, Kathy
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October 19, 2013 at 5:12 AM
and I am honoured to share the top spot with YOU! you are a superb poet...and this is a superb write, a vivid and poignant glimpse into this woman's lonely life; I like the subtle use of rhyme scattered throughout - congrats :)
Johnson Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 10:46 PM
Wonderfully well done Carrie. I enjoyed every word and felt the loneliness. Congratulations on a well deserved win. Love, Joyce.
Roberts Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 6:58 PM
lovely lovely lovely Carrie well done ...Seren
Jones Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 6:01 PM
Carrie....wonderful poem..could be about many people in any place...so relatable..... awesome job....congratulations.... I'm so honored to be here with you as well as shocked....
Guzzi Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 4:01 PM
Congrad's on your win. fav line [where the silence shouts loud ] Light & Love
Ryerson Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 3:43 PM
Your repeating of the line 'maybe the phone will ring' only adds more punch to this beauty Carrie...You have captured the mood perfectly here my friend...Congrats - Tim
Manassian Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 2:52 PM
Congrats, Carrie...Makes one want to weep...yes, i could picture her aching loneliness...you captured it SO SO well. Makes me want to visit. I used to visit a lady in an old age home...She used to be a socialite. She took pride in showing me a picture of her and Paul Newman! Can you imagine!!! But in the end....the stories were getting shorter, as her mind was taken up by issues of her health...SO SO sad....Your piece is a masterpiece...i can see why Frank honored it...Hugs
Mehta Avatar
October 17, 2013 at 10:24 PM
Nice faces of loneliness you have pictured so well, Carrie
Andresen Avatar
October 17, 2013 at 2:53 PM
.... so sad .... give me the number .... I call .... very well done Carrie! - Believe it or not but this is the winning poem!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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October 18, 2013 at 2:04 PM
- HOORAY!! - NUMBER ONE!! - YOU WON!! - HOORAY!! - CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!!!!!!
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