The Wait

Wandering rain clouds Crimson lotus in two pots How long will I wait ____________________________ July 11, 2017

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Date: 7/19/2017 1:43:00 PM

beautiful, beautiful, sooooo beautiful. This haiku is beyond compliments... Great lines friend

Probir Gupta
Date: 7/19/2017 9:50:00 PM

Thank you ...

Date: 7/11/2017 1:15:00 PM

The blossoming always comes after the rain. Beautiful haiku, Probir. Your intrepid eyes speak louder than dry words. Love always, my friend.

Probir Gupta
Date: 7/19/2017 9:52:00 PM

Thank you, dear friend for looking beyond the surface and liking ...

Date: 7/11/2017 9:27:00 AM

One can not rush beauty, Probir:) They will come when they have all their make up on.

Probir Gupta
Date: 7/11/2017 12:07:00 PM

Absolutely right! But the cloud and rain give rise to pain!

Date: 7/11/2017 7:55:00 AM

- Beauty is always worth waiting for ... patience my friend :) - Lovely written - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Probir Gupta
Date: 7/11/2017 12:08:00 PM

The way clouds darken the sky, patience runs out ...

Date: 7/11/2017 2:31:00 AM

Heavenly my friend, Probir. Wonderful to see you again!

Probir Gupta
Date: 7/11/2017 12:12:00 PM

Thank you ...

Date: 7/11/2017 2:10:00 AM

Sending you watery wishes, Probir! Lovely haiku

Probir Gupta
Date: 7/11/2017 12:15:00 PM

Thank you ! ...