The Wagtail

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wind whips the shrubs swing ice glitters generates glee wagtail wings weakened Written: January 19, 2022 Nature Haiku with Alliteration Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin Alliteration - Old Or New Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joseph May

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Bill Baker

Date: 1/19/2022 2:21:00 PM

Made me smile with this one Lasaad. Have a great day! Bill

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/19/2022 1:02:00 PM

Charming, my friend, Lasaad! Wonderful photo! Blessings.

Judy Ball

Date: 1/19/2022 12:56:00 PM

Oh I really like this one and the pic is just beautiful. Good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/19/2022 11:59:00 AM

You rose well to the challenge Lasaad, great alliteration, hope your week is going well. Tom

Sotto Poet
Date: 1/19/2022 12:12:00 PM

Thank you so much for your excellent assistance. Tom, I hope you could recover from the flu and that you are feeling well now.

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/19/2022 11:01:00 AM

Great Haiku Lasaad. Mesmerizing :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/19/2022 9:29:00 AM

Great alliteration. Best for a win.

David Kavanagh

Date: 1/19/2022 8:33:00 AM

A haiku with a tongue twisting difference, you weaved the Wagtail weekend together quite adeptly and entertainingly Lasaad, all the best for contest, cheers David

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 1/19/2022 8:12:00 AM

Nature chants and enchants here on your wonderful Poetry page by a gifted maestro who composed an amazing Nature music! In awe of your inspiring poetry, Lasaad! Worthy of an outshining win! My deepest regards and blessings.