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as best she can she tries to insulate each gap of silence the voids the cracks with everything she can anything to blur the reality she wants so desperately to gloss over and forget mindless chatter most times sadly pathetic AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Submitted on April 10, 2021 for contest ALL YOURS (APR 12) sponsored by BRIAN STRAND Originally posted on March 21, 2021

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Date: 4/14/2021 8:36:00 PM
Love the structure and lines. Beautiful!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/15/2021 8:51:00 AM
Thank you very much, George ~
Date: 4/12/2021 7:17:00 PM
Write on!! Great and fun read! Lonna
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/12/2021 9:38:00 PM
Thank you, Lonna ~ most appreciated
Date: 4/12/2021 4:16:00 PM
Back with congratulations. Glad to see this profound poem i the winners’ list of All Yours..
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/12/2021 9:38:00 PM
Thank you very much, JCB ~
Date: 3/21/2021 6:40:00 PM
But no matter how she tries to conceal the imperfections things will never be the same. The void the cracks are like an echoing sadness...returning back. I love this poem..A FAVE..All d best Line.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/21/2021 8:27:00 PM
Thank you for the lovely compliment, JCB ~
Date: 3/21/2021 4:56:00 PM
That final line filled with emotion! Hugs, sweet lady. xx
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/21/2021 8:27:00 PM
Thanks, Kim ~
Date: 3/21/2021 4:37:00 PM
This is poignant and priceless Line.
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Date: 3/21/2021 8:27:00 PM
Thank, Caren ~
Date: 3/21/2021 4:05:00 PM
A compelling poem, Line. There have been times I wished to "blur...reality," but it always comes back and smacks me in the face. Awesome work, my friend! Hugs, carolyn
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/21/2021 4:19:00 PM
Thank you very much, Carolyn ~
Date: 3/21/2021 3:44:00 PM
Silence can be painful, sometimes even empty chatter can be a way to lift it~
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/21/2021 4:19:00 PM
Thanks for your visit and comment, Michelle ~
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 3/21/2021 4:05:00 PM
So true!

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