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The Voids the Cracks

as best she can
she tries
to insulate
each gap
of silence

the voids the cracks
with everything she can

anything to blur
the reality
she wants
so desperately
to gloss over
and forget

mindless chatter
most times sadly pathetic



AP: Honorable Mention 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Stathakis Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 8:36 PM
Love the structure and lines. Beautiful!
Gauthier Avatar
April 15, 2021 at 8:51 AM
Thank you very much, George ~
Blodgett Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 7:17 PM
Write on!! Great and fun read! Lonna
Gauthier Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 9:38 PM
Thank you, Lonna ~ most appreciated
Brul Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 4:16 PM
Back with congratulations. Glad to see this profound poem i the winners’ list of All Yours..
Gauthier Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 9:38 PM
Thank you very much, JCB ~
Brul Avatar
March 21, 2021 at 6:40 PM
But no matter how she tries to conceal the imperfections things will never be the same. The void the cracks are like an echoing sadness...returning back. I love this poem..A FAVE..All d best Line.
Gauthier Avatar
March 21, 2021 at 8:27 PM
Thank you for the lovely compliment, JCB ~
Rodrigues Avatar
March 21, 2021 at 4:56 PM
That final line filled with emotion! Hugs, sweet lady. xx
Gauthier Avatar
March 21, 2021 at 8:27 PM
Thanks, Kim ~
Krutsinger Avatar
March 21, 2021 at 4:37 PM
This is poignant and priceless Line.
Gauthier Avatar
March 21, 2021 at 8:27 PM
Thank, Caren ~
Devonshire Avatar
March 21, 2021 at 4:05 PM
A compelling poem, Line. There have been times I wished to "blur...reality," but it always comes back and smacks me in the face. Awesome work, my friend! Hugs, carolyn
Gauthier Avatar
March 21, 2021 at 4:19 PM
Thank you very much, Carolyn ~
Faulkner Avatar
March 21, 2021 at 3:44 PM
Silence can be painful, sometimes even empty chatter can be a way to lift it~
Gauthier Avatar
March 21, 2021 at 4:19 PM
Thanks for your visit and comment, Michelle ~
Devonshire Avatar
March 21, 2021 at 4:05 PM
So true!
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