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God as conscience is that inner voice within me, the infinite spirit that has formed my morals; a holy power that reminds me of my duty and scruples, and each day I thank God for his divine lessons. Childlike innocence has made me a prey, for wicked people who see me as an easy target; like a child spontaneous, trusting, a trustful fool, but I listen to the voice within and turn away. When I disobey the lessons I know are right, it never ends well, I run riot, a rebel lost; I ignore what is my moral code sometimes, God knows I am not perfect and gently speaks. Souls blue skies turn grey, murky and gloomy, and my heart and soul is bleeding my essence; but I reach out my hand to God and he holds me, darkness turns into azure and shadows are defeated. Betrayal by my hand is like a Judas kiss, when I have been unfaithful to my morals of life; I am let down in myself and will make penance, promise God that I can be a good faithful believer. Life's barren and bland without God on my side, everything is empty and parched and unfruitful; my life is dull and tedious, flat and nothing, I need my faith, I need God to be my true me. Until I awake to evil that seeks me always, for the devil takes many forms so I must be aware; vigilant, heedful, watchful with each person I meet, it is sad that I must be on guard but this is life. Dark desires forsake and yearnings tempt, but I must go slowly and carefully in my actions; be it passion or ambition, I must not surrender my faith to feed my cravings- I must be strong. _______________________ April 14, 2022 Poetry/Verse/The Voice Within Me Copyright Protected, ID 04-1447-827-14 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Premier contest, Soul Betrayal sponsor, Unseeking Seeker, Judged 04/24/2022 Second Place

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Date: 4/26/2022 9:35:00 AM
Your poem is beautiful and full of heart. As for erring, I believe many of us do. But God knows we are fragile and easily bend but he loves us just the same. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 4/26/2022 8:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a wonderful story/write/picture. I love your line, "I must not surrender my faith to feed my cravings- I must be strong." So very true. Have a blessed day writing away.........................
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Date: 4/26/2022 8:38:00 AM
Paula, thank you so much for the congratulations and the compliment, I like that line too, blessings ~Constance
Date: 4/24/2022 11:58:00 PM
Absolutely brilliant, Constance! Thanks fo4 sharing, congrats on your compelling win with this masterpiece
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Date: 4/25/2022 1:39:00 PM
Seeker, thank you so much for the inspiration and contest and for my placement and the compliment and congrats, appreciate ~Constance
Date: 4/24/2022 6:51:00 PM
"Life's barren and bland without God on my side" - Great experience. Beautifully written work. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/25/2022 1:40:00 PM
Christuraj, thank you so much for the comment, compliment and congratulations ~Constance
Date: 4/17/2022 7:01:00 PM
With the inherent human frailties we are likely to fall ! But the desire to stand up and abide in God's protective hold can save us ! An inspiring account of your dependence on God and your awareness of the traps set before us and the efforts to overcome them . A sure winner in the contest !
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Date: 4/18/2022 9:48:00 AM
Valsa, thank you so much for the comment, compliment, and encouragement ~Constance
Date: 4/14/2022 7:56:00 PM
Constance, hi & thank you for sharing this inspired & inspiring declaration of your soul, your deep devotion. Honored to know you and be able to read your work. xox sally
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Date: 4/15/2022 8:36:00 AM
Sally, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem and it is very nice to know you also ~Constance

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