The Visitor

The woman sits silently
on the edge of the bed

A thin shaft of afternoon sun
from a tear in faded curtains
slices the murky room,
landing on the man's damp body
half-covered with draggled sheets

She had completed her dressing.
Now slipping into her shoes,
She lights a cigarette;
exhales deeply,
the smoke rising lazily to the ceiling.

There is no conversation.

She eyes the money
wedged under the half-full glasses
plonked on the dusty dressing table

"See you next week," she says,
mechanically,
as she heads for the door,
collecting the notes.

It was not a question.



A BRIAN STRAND Vers Libre Poetry Contest placed 1st
Sponsored by: Brian Strand
Date wrote: 6th March 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Krutsinger Avatar
April 1, 2022 at 10:25 PM
This line tells so much! "There is no conversation." - I like that you segregated it, which made it more pronounced.
Miller Avatar
April 2, 2022 at 6:08 AM
Thank you so much Caren.
Dietrich Avatar
March 8, 2022 at 1:33 PM
oh I love this one. Awesome writing!!!
Miller Avatar
April 2, 2022 at 6:09 AM
Thank you so much Andrea I really feel good when I receive a compliment from you.
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