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The Visit

my love came to me with a song i played it over and over all day long and love reminded me of memories memories that have traveled through my heart, my mind and soul showing me things my eye's can no longer behold my ears can no longer hear or my hands grasp or my tommorows hope for she showed me love i had and wished i had yes indeed i was very glad my memories today the best i ever had thoughts of her dived in and out of me changing me like channels playing me like keys all my deep emotions each one as she pleased my joy, my tears she vanquished my fears we spoke and said what we came to say that our love will live forever and a day i was amazed at how God let her speak in his secret and special way that He and i speak i know you don't believe you have to have faith when i need God the most He shows me a little of His face (this is a true story)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/22/2011 10:36:00 PM
This speaks to my soul. Beautiful. I feel I have lived the same moment. Yours most true, Windyann
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Date: 7/12/2011 9:16:00 PM
Very nicely done my friend. A beautiful piece. God Bless, JB
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Date: 7/7/2011 3:39:00 PM
beautiful John and I esp love the last stanza. Nice job with that, Well done myt friend
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Date: 6/29/2011 5:47:00 PM
this was a great write john hope to share more with you. cory
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Date: 6/29/2011 7:59:00 AM
Love this one, introspective and deeply sensitive. Very well done my friend. xoxo
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Date: 6/28/2011 4:48:00 PM
like all of your poetry...amazing. Touching. Beautiful. Thank you for writing and you were right, the faithful DO stick around :) Got 5 comments today! Ha reassurance is a beautiful thing. Thanks again
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Date: 6/28/2011 8:28:00 AM
I love this poem and it shows your deep emotional faith with God. I know what you mean. love phyl
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Date: 6/27/2011 4:19:00 PM
Enjoyed this one John...It left me wondering though...Is this a new person that you have met or is it about memories of the past?...My poem "Loves Flame Drenched" is about differences in the sexes or personalities..Like a woman who enjoys a romantic movie which is a stress relief and a soft go between work, home, children, problems, etc. to lead to romance..Then the man who wants to watch a Western, murder mystery, boxing, wrestling as a stress relief, go between work and play...Sara
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Date: 6/24/2011 1:00:00 PM
I can relate to this on some level...unearthly visitations...in a way it taps into my poem 'double phantasy', similar subject matter but different circumstances..."changing me like channels/playing me like keys" those are two great lines my sweet...
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Date: 6/24/2011 3:26:00 AM
nicely great, well done sir.
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Date: 6/22/2011 9:05:00 PM
sweetly emotional piece John.. feeling your pain of loss of one so special..yet she is ever with u in spirit luv.. very tender expressions. ..luv.
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