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The Visage of the One Inside

I thought I saw, just passing by Another form, another face And though I could not tell you why They disappeared without a trace Somewhat intrigued by what I saw I lingered there with great concern And though I felt my stomach gnaw I waited for that soul's return A steady rain was falling fast When suddenly, to my surprise The figure from my recent past Resumed a spot before my eyes Although my clothes were old and torn My frame of mind was not ashamed For when I saw that face forlorn I knew their soul could not be blamed A chilly wind was blowing hard But still that person did not budge Nor leave their spot across the yard From where they stood to be my judge I did not run or hide just then For when I thought what they must think I felt my soul renew again By someone standing on the brink But then a motor car appeared To catch a curb that swelled with rain I felt the splash and what I feared Became the soul who cried in vain I should have lingered soaking wet A victim of my foolish pride But who could stay and not forget The visage of the one inside.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 9/7/2020 1:26:00 AM
Congratulations Bryan on your 1st place in the competition. You write the type of poems I love to read.
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Bryan Norton
Date: 9/7/2020 5:57:00 AM
Thank you, Gary. I like to be accessible. I want to help the general public to enjoy reading good poetry. To see what can be done with words, with rhyme and wordplay. Poetry should be the orgasmic fulfillment of English Literature, not the bane of it.
Date: 9/6/2020 5:22:00 PM
This has depth and hidden nuance that is raw, haunting. Great write Bryan. Congrats on the win.
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Bryan Norton
Date: 9/6/2020 6:22:00 PM
Good to hear from you again. Thank you for your kindly comments. Take care, my friend.
Date: 9/6/2020 4:53:00 PM
Great rhyme. Congrats on the win! Linda
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Bryan Norton
Date: 9/6/2020 6:21:00 PM
Thank you, Linda. Good luck in your poetic future.
Date: 9/6/2020 4:18:00 PM
Congrats on a great win!:)
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Bryan Norton
Date: 9/6/2020 4:25:00 PM
Thank you, Brenda. Take care.
Date: 9/6/2020 3:00:00 PM
wow, Bryan, outstanding work and look there . You scored really high with this. Mine did not even make it to HMs!! Congrats
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Bryan Norton
Date: 9/6/2020 4:24:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. I got lucky, you got talent!
Date: 9/6/2020 3:00:00 PM
I scanned for the poem you mentioned but did not see it. Can you tell me its date?
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Bryan Norton
Date: 9/6/2020 4:23:00 PM
Yes, 2/8/2020
Date: 9/5/2020 10:13:00 AM
Bryan this is heartbreaking. Your words just reach out to capture the reader. So often we walk pass those wearing rags and not remember they once had a life that is brought back to life by seeing a "form" or a "face." Thank you for sharing this perspective. I think this should be a POTD.
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Bryan Norton
Date: 9/5/2020 10:42:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words and perspective, and especially for your feelings. I enjoyed writing this poem and feeling those feelings along the way. Best wishes, Bryan.

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