Get Your Premium Membership

The Village On the Water Iii

Shallow-pitched tiled rooftops sparkle vividly
 When lavishly sprinkled with needle-shaped grains  
Of shattered mutton-fat nephrite; 
    There, clinging forlornly against the hanging grey   
  Smoke, tinged with barely noticeable trace of mauve, 
   Dawdling lazily in the stilled air, residue from
 Remnant of mist inclined to prolong and hesitate; 
Continues to resist...almost as if were a 
    Wearisome, overstaying guest too reluctant to leave.
  Our snug, rested houses: how they are adapted to speak       
   So ably of themselves...such a fulfilling contentment;
 Within, securely ensconced, crammed lives fully 
Busied with common endeavour.
    Could an ideal be any more perfect than this?

  Then recalling the words of Master Kong:-
   "Everything has beauty...but not everyone sees it."
  
 Which, undeniably, is very true. They who do not see 
The appealing loveliness and intrinsic functionality of 
    Purposeful lines, are, indeed, the lesser for the want 
  Of what, in essence...is nothing more than a learned 
   Awareness.

 At these precious moments ones beset spirit             
Is reinforced against the day's coming labours; 
    He is further encouraged by thoughts of his 
  Fussing wife attending her dutiful stove;                                                 
   Her ostentatious lips, shapely hips made wider by 
 Childbirth... 
For is this not the most natural function of 
    All women? 
  Apart from menial, repetitive tasks of course.
   Laozi full well knew the supposed crimes of 
 A woman. 
He would tell you to only beat her with a stick
    As thick as your middle finger.
  "Not so hard! you fool", he would have said.
   "Do you not need her for more work?"
 "Besides...you might break a good stick".

However, one must be cautioned to try and remember:- 
    "If there is beauty in the person...there will 
  Be harmony in the house".

   But I still fully intend to keep my stick! 
 It is slim and supple and is pleasingly fashioned
In the right-made way; 
    A willowy semblance of a virtuous wife in  
  Former flush of nubile youth; 
   A sharp reminder for the values of obedience and 
 Honour...would that she should ever forget.

Sun breaks! Hoisted square canvas. 
    Soon, an irregular blob reduced to a tiny speck
  Charting its way between glimmer and glint;
   At times, sliding out of view into shimmering and
 Dazzling from low blinding glare -- hiding and confusing;
Then, flashing sunbeams suddenly revealing up...
    Before skipping and darting away, 
  As gleefully as a loosed hare, across  
   The glassed, hollowing emptiness of this vast, 
 Reverberating, convex-sphere;
And everyone his own favoured place for each 
    Changeable day of each changing season.
  Distant shouts. Excitable voices. Men busily employed 
   At their daily work.
 My own drawing net boiling and frantic with the 
Bumping from darting, silvered fish;
  
    For it is certain that all peasants are born to work...
  Just as the oxen is born to haul: for is this not 
   Our rightfully inherited karma?
 Sun Tzu instructs us that a man has to 
Willingly accept his station in life;
    Knowing what is required of his own situation 
  Is to find reassurance in the heavens. 
   And in Celestial Heaven the Jade Emperor counting  
 The passing of each mortal life... 
As if they were spent, detached leaves dropping  
    From the Sacred Peach Tree.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/10/2021 5:21:00 AM
On to part IV. Elaine
Login to Reply
Date: 11/27/2020 1:28:00 PM
Seems like a village in South East Asia... Nice storytelling John..
Login to Reply
Fleming Avatar
John Fleming
Date: 11/28/2020 11:12:00 AM
Many thanks for the visit and comment, Silent One...always appreciated. The poem is the third poem in a saga I am writing concerning a village located in Hubei Province, China from an area known as "The Three Gorges"...I have set the period in the late Imperial age...17th/18th century. Best regards! :) john

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry