The Village On the Water Ii

Gradually the crystalizing dawn -- more hardened  
    Than folded steel --- more sharper than 
  The blade that cuts! 
   Wisps of thin vapour, once loitering insidiously 
 At the steps of each staunch door,
Swirling away -- seemingly almost alive!
    Coiling and uncoiling. Has all the litheness of a
  Dancing girls weightless silken ribbon. 
   Until, retreating back, high, into some lofty, 
 Inaccessible mountain... 
Dissipates as if just abandoned dragons breath.

    The trees and streams are no longer so solemn. 

  Circling over the temple, above the brittle lands 
   Frosted chill, red-beaked choughs noisily engaged 
 In agitated clattering...
But now the temple bells are commanding those 
    Monks to prayer. 

  The blind and withered monk, who sits alone
   In his unassuming corner, reminds us:-
 "An emperor who abuses his power unsettles the  
Equilibrium of the whole nation, the workings of 
    Nature, 
  And the livelihood of all people; 
   His responsibility is to maintain harmony in 
 Himself and the empire...
By acting in accordance with Confucian principles". 
    
    It is for them to contemplate what we cannot 
  Comprehend:-
   We are peasants and it is not expected of us 
 To understand such wise things; nor should we.
   
We understand the fish and their ways, and the 
    Ways of the Blue River...
  Just as monks understand our gracious lord Buddha.

   Rouses the sun. Slowly lifts an enormous sky. 
 
 Glistening hoarfrost spun from bramble to 
Bush -- strung from bough to branch like 
    Giant spider web;
  Stiffened grasses that so pleasingly crunch 
   Underfoot; 
 And from these grasses, droplets of moisture
Ready to be released like slow weeping tears;
    They will join with and sweeten the vibrant
  Spring waters -- clearer than quartz --
   That stream in tripping rivulets over yellow rocks
 To splash from shallow cup to pouring pool...
Once you have tasted these waters you would 
    Have little more need of wine.
  Wine is for idle men, or for our warring masters 
   To drink when celebrating great victory;
 What use have we of intoxicating wine?
It is better kept as an offering...
    Lest the river Gods grow angry and 
  Spoil our catch.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 1/10/2021 5:17:00 AM
This plays like a movie...I see it so vividly. Simply mesmerizing! I am off to III. ~Elaine
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Date: 11/13/2020 3:41:00 PM
John, most hear just notes while you listen to symphonies. Yours is a practically solitary gift—transforming words to art that speaks of a world so vividly real that I expect to be in it the moment my eyes lift from the page. Such meritorious work.
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Date: 11/22/2020 9:15:00 AM
Mark, that is about as good as any accolade for any persons work that any person could ever hope to get -- thank you!! Please be assured that you are always most welcome here -- cheers! And my very best regards! :) john
Date: 9/5/2020 9:45:00 AM
Intriguing sights and sounds of the village on the water--so much to gleam and reflect--a lesson on another culture.
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Date: 9/5/2020 10:50:00 AM
Thanks, Vijay -- your continuing support is really most appreciated! I think your ending comment here sums it all up rather quite perfectly: "a lesson on another culture". If you find time try reading Ezra Pounds Canto 49: known as "For the seven lakes" verse. Also his collected Chinese inspired poetry "Cathay"...you will not be disappointed - cheers! :) john
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