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The Best Feeling Ever

When he whispers, I'll love you forever, and each word resonates within your heart, indeed, that is the best feeling ever. You'll never tire of hearing it, never, for your depleted heart, gets a jumpstart when he whispers, I'll love you forever. Soulmates forge a bond that time can't sever he calls you baby; you call him sweetheart; indeed, that is the best feeling ever. Fear can set your pulse to throb, however, those anxieties instantly depart when he whispers, I'll love you forever. When you harbor no doubt whatsoever, for you know, come what may, you'll never part, indeed, that is the best feeling ever. You long to hear those sweet words whenever anxieties and doubts threaten to start. When he whispers, I'll love you forever, indeed, that is the best feeling ever!

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Date: 9/2/2018 3:04:00 PM
Lovely, Emile.
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Date: 9/2/2018 6:20:00 PM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/29/2018 3:57:00 PM
Although having never written a Villanelle myself, I can still recognize the great talent and creative romantic beauty in this wondrous offering my dear friend. This is exactly how I feel about my beloved wife... A fav, you nailed this one my dear friend..
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Date: 8/29/2018 4:01:00 PM
Thank you so much Robert, your kind words are much appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/29/2018 10:23:00 AM
A superb Villanelle Emile, I love it for it's repeating lines feel so melodic...so romantic, well done dear Poet!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/29/2018 2:05:00 PM
Thanks John, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/29/2018 7:22:00 AM
A very nice Villanelle Emile. Leaves a good feeling :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/29/2018 7:32:00 AM
Thanks Heidi, I appreciate you support my friend, Emile.

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