The Velvet Chair

Many have felt,
my soft velvet skin,
from the common to royal,
my service I lend.

Sometimes for hours,
they sit, and think,
as they rock, and rest,
and their sleepy eyes blink.

Once I was lonely,
no one called on me,
they said I was to pretty,
with my hand carved feet.

Up in a room,
I was cold, and alone,
till my mother fell apart,
her rocking days gone.

Years have passed,
and I am still here,
I have comforted many,
and caught their tears.

Although I have noticed,
a little squeak now, and then,
I'm still rocking strong,
and my service I lend.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 4/7/2009 8:25:00 AM
Great write by a great poet. This is a very nice personification. Thanks for sharing. Ernilando
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Date: 2/27/2009 10:03:00 AM
Awesome personification. I truly felt through your words the feelings, thoughts, and memories of the chair as if they were my own. I can picture the carved feet and its so velvet cover as if it were standing before me. You truly have a way of giving life to an inanimate object. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 2/26/2009 2:20:00 PM
Christy, I had chills when I read "till my mother fell apart,her rocking days gone." You certainly do bring life and personality to your "Velvet Chair." Good luck in the contest, Carolyn
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Date: 2/19/2009 7:56:00 PM
A beautiful write Chisty,I bet it was red too lol,God Bless,love you,Marie
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Date: 2/19/2009 7:17:00 PM
Good luck in the contest..I dont think you'll need luck though ..this is great. BG
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Date: 2/19/2009 5:54:00 PM
Wonderfully heart-felt personification my dear friend!!! Hello Precious & Gifted Christy Hardy!!! I sincerely hope that life is going wonderfully for you and yours today dear lady!!? This write had such a gentle, warm and loving flow unto it~and I could tell that it was written from your your very heart and soul~precious as they are!!! Excellent Write Christy~Much Warmth & Many Blessings To You & All Your Loves, Always, John!":)
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Date: 2/19/2009 1:02:00 PM
if you are going to enter this in the "Chair" contest, i'm a done deal. if perhaps you have of such contest, please disregard this message
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Date: 2/19/2009 1:02:00 PM
This is a very good write. The chair's voice can be heard throughout this piece. Best wishes in the contest.
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Date: 2/19/2009 11:32:00 AM
Very nice story and a tale to tell. I like the last two lines. Good luck in the contest! Laura :0)
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Date: 2/19/2009 10:41:00 AM
Sweet poem, I especially like the little squeak now and then....just like my old bones...!! A lovely entry to the Chair's Tale contest!! Good luck! ~ Carrie
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