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The vaporised self

bliss spasms compel pristine soul presence to remain receptive to God’s omnipresence as we be so spoon-fed by the magical universe free from doubt and fear we hum a melodious verse each offering being unique our mind requires no answer music of spheres resounds to rhythm of the cosmic dancer

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Date: 2/4/2024 11:08:00 AM
Your poem beautifully explores the notion of spiritual connection and surrender to the divine presence opening with the evocative image of "bliss spasms," suggesting a profound experience of spiritual ecstasy or transcendence. This intense sensation compels the "pristine soul presence" to remain open and receptive to the omnipresence of God
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Date: 2/4/2024 6:13:00 PM
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