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The Valley Remembers

The wind doesn’t howl here-- it warns. Each breath drawn is borrowed from the bones beneath. They told me to fear the shadow, but never the silence that follows. I walk where others knelt, blade dulled, spirit frayed, still searching for the summit that keeps shifting skyward. I do not ask for light-- only the strength to keep walking where ghosts refuse to rest.

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Date: 5/13/2025 5:53:00 PM
There is life where the ghosts gamble on the light, the summit you seek is inside, the apex of your heart's wisdom...Determination is a life force in this quest poem Alesia. The perseverance seems to be a penance for self actualization. There's a contention in this poem amongst the concepts, expectations and motivations for life and survival. I can relate very much to the journey and attitude of this poem's perspective.
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Alesia Leach
Date: 5/18/2025 12:46:00 PM
Justin, your words reflect the heart of the piece so clearly--it’s as if you walked the same trail. That tension between what drives us and what defines us was exactly what I hoped to convey. Your insight into perseverance as penance really struck me. I’m deeply grateful for the way you engage with each layer. Thank you for journeying into the valley with me.

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