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The Urge of the Stalker

He stopped in his tracks.
He could not believe his weary eyes.
There she was, young, lithe and beautiful.
He felt something stirring in the pit of his stomach.
He had to know who she was.  It was imperative.
It suddenly became an urge,
And it would drive him mad 
If he could not know more about her.

Madness!  Perhaps, but the urge to follow her 
Pushed him to the limits.  He would never rest.
He saw her enter Wal-Mart.
He cursed himself. 
His dress was nondescript, threadbare.
They would not allow him in the store.
Trust to luck, he thought.

At last she came out and he followed her,
But she seemed to go in circles, 
Now stopping at some shop,
Now at some hairdresser’s shop.
Finally he saw her enter a police station.

Incredible for within a few minutes
He found himself arrested and accused of stalking.
He looked at her and saw her angry red face.
She had seen him following her.
The old man smiled and asked the officer 
If he could open his wallet.
They checked him for any weapons and found none.

He opened his wallet and took out a picture,
An exact replica of his wife.
She was dead now and they took away his only daughter.
Perhaps she was his daughter.
He had to find out.  The urge was too great.
He assured her he had no bad intentions.
And it turned out he was right.
She was her daughter.
,

10 November 2021

Subject URGE no. 4
''U'' Contest, New Poems Only Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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George Avatar
February 13, 2022 at 3:38 AM
An incredible story of a chance finding ! A very dramatic development.... and at the same time having a convincing ending ! Really enjoyed this beautiful write, Victor !
Koplin Avatar
November 20, 2021 at 7:41 AM
Awesome! Congrats Victor!!
Allison Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 2:49 AM
wow what a superb story Victor, many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
La France Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 1:21 PM
Victor, an incredible write and congratulations on your Second Place win in my "U" Contest, New Poems ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Dietrich Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 2:01 PM
wow, I love this story and the cool ending . I guess this is one I missed . Congrats!
Alex Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 10:29 AM
Great narration and a beautiful story. Congratulations!
Kitchin Avatar
November 14, 2021 at 5:35 AM
A captivating poem Victor, well done! hugs
Daniel Avatar
November 14, 2021 at 4:58 AM
A great entertaining story, Victor, with your landmark twist:)
Edmonds  Avatar
November 12, 2021 at 6:21 PM
A fantastic free verse write Victor, the story has a surprise ending, a wonderful ending. Perfect poetry for the contest… Belle
Poet Avatar
November 11, 2021 at 9:13 PM
Wow, such an excellent piece of writing/story! We could understand her fear and that the last stanza was particularly fascinating Victor. Soupmail
Roper Avatar
November 11, 2021 at 4:57 PM
Wow, great write, and the last stanza intriguing
Kendrick Avatar
November 11, 2021 at 2:57 PM
Ahh!! What a wonderful story told in poetic form but there for a few minutes I felt that it might go the other way. Reads like a good contender to the contest to me. Way to go. Your visit to my page was encouraging. Sara
Jones Avatar
November 11, 2021 at 12:54 PM
You had me engaged on the end of my seat thinking oh no...but it ends happily. yay! like
Buehler Avatar
November 11, 2021 at 11:58 AM
I love happy endings, and your touching tale didn't disappoint, Victor. Best wishes for the contest. Evelyn :)
Rodrigues Avatar
November 11, 2021 at 4:32 AM
Great story! Couldn’t blame her for being afraid, but he turned out to be her father!
Seeker Avatar
November 11, 2021 at 2:24 AM
Quite a story teller you are, Victor! Enjoyed the read!
George Avatar
November 10, 2021 at 9:52 PM
With eager urge, followed the thread of the story. The twist at the end was indeed dramatic.... ! Interesting write !
Poet Avatar
November 10, 2021 at 3:08 PM
Victor, your narrative is quite intriguing and entertaining, with a good twist towards the conclusion.
Rose  Avatar
November 10, 2021 at 2:53 PM
Oh my that is quite a story Victor, I am glad it turned out to be His Daughter :)
Lawless Avatar
November 10, 2021 at 9:48 AM
Very interesting and entertaining story Victor and with a nice twist at the end.
Cunningham Avatar
November 10, 2021 at 7:25 AM
A simple misunderstanding can lead to all sorts of unwanted outcomes, thankfully it had a happy ending. Tom
Bayles Avatar
November 10, 2021 at 7:22 AM
This is great, Victor. I especially liked the last stanza. You got into the head of this character well.
Skelly Avatar
November 10, 2021 at 6:26 AM
Victor, love the twist at the end, a really good write...Delice
Pandit Avatar
November 10, 2021 at 5:42 AM
Another phenomenal write from your talented pen, Victor. You had me traversing in intrigue throughout. Excellent turn in the end. A first place win!
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