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The Urge of the Stalker

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He stopped in his tracks. He could not believe his weary eyes. There she was, young, lithe and beautiful. He felt something stirring in the pit of his stomach. He had to know who she was. It was imperative. It suddenly became an urge, And it would drive him mad If he could not know more about her. Madness! Perhaps, but the urge to follow her Pushed him to the limits. He would never rest. He saw her enter Wal-Mart. He cursed himself. His dress was nondescript, threadbare. They would not allow him in the store. Trust to luck, he thought. At last she came out and he followed her, But she seemed to go in circles, Now stopping at some shop, Now at some hairdresser’s shop. Finally he saw her enter a police station. Incredible for within a few minutes He found himself arrested and accused of stalking. He looked at her and saw her angry red face. She had seen him following her. The old man smiled and asked the officer If he could open his wallet. They checked him for any weapons and found none. He opened his wallet and took out a picture, An exact replica of his wife. She was dead now and they took away his only daughter. Perhaps she was his daughter. He had to find out. The urge was too great. He assured her he had no bad intentions. And it turned out he was right. She was her daughter. , 10 November 2021 Subject URGE no. 4 ''U'' Contest, New Poems Only Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 2/13/2022 3:38:00 AM
An incredible story of a chance finding ! A very dramatic development.... and at the same time having a convincing ending ! Really enjoyed this beautiful write, Victor !
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Date: 11/20/2021 7:41:00 AM
Awesome! Congrats Victor!!
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Date: 11/18/2021 2:49:00 AM
wow what a superb story Victor, many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/16/2021 1:21:00 PM
Victor, an incredible write and congratulations on your Second Place win in my "U" Contest, New Poems ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Date: 11/15/2021 2:01:00 PM
wow, I love this story and the cool ending . I guess this is one I missed . Congrats!
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Date: 11/15/2021 10:29:00 AM
Great narration and a beautiful story. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/14/2021 5:35:00 AM
A captivating poem Victor, well done! hugs
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Date: 11/14/2021 4:58:00 AM
A great entertaining story, Victor, with your landmark twist:)
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Date: 11/12/2021 6:21:00 PM
A fantastic free verse write Victor, the story has a surprise ending, a wonderful ending. Perfect poetry for the contest… Belle
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Date: 11/11/2021 9:13:00 PM
Wow, such an excellent piece of writing/story! We could understand her fear and that the last stanza was particularly fascinating Victor. Soupmail
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Date: 11/11/2021 4:57:00 PM
Wow, great write, and the last stanza intriguing
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Date: 11/11/2021 2:57:00 PM
Ahh!! What a wonderful story told in poetic form but there for a few minutes I felt that it might go the other way. Reads like a good contender to the contest to me. Way to go. Your visit to my page was encouraging. Sara
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Date: 11/11/2021 12:54:00 PM
You had me engaged on the end of my seat thinking oh no...but it ends happily. yay! like
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Date: 11/11/2021 11:58:00 AM
I love happy endings, and your touching tale didn't disappoint, Victor. Best wishes for the contest. Evelyn :)
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Date: 11/11/2021 4:32:00 AM
Great story! Couldn’t blame her for being afraid, but he turned out to be her father!
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Date: 11/11/2021 2:24:00 AM
Quite a story teller you are, Victor! Enjoyed the read!
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Date: 11/10/2021 9:52:00 PM
With eager urge, followed the thread of the story. The twist at the end was indeed dramatic.... ! Interesting write !
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Date: 11/10/2021 3:08:00 PM
Victor, your narrative is quite intriguing and entertaining, with a good twist towards the conclusion.
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Date: 11/10/2021 2:53:00 PM
Oh my that is quite a story Victor, I am glad it turned out to be His Daughter :)
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Date: 11/10/2021 9:48:00 AM
Very interesting and entertaining story Victor and with a nice twist at the end.
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Date: 11/10/2021 7:25:00 AM
A simple misunderstanding can lead to all sorts of unwanted outcomes, thankfully it had a happy ending. Tom
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Date: 11/10/2021 7:22:00 AM
This is great, Victor. I especially liked the last stanza. You got into the head of this character well.
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Date: 11/10/2021 6:26:00 AM
Victor, love the twist at the end, a really good write...Delice
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Date: 11/10/2021 5:42:00 AM
Another phenomenal write from your talented pen, Victor. You had me traversing in intrigue throughout. Excellent turn in the end. A first place win!
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