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Poetry/Rhyme/Upscale Party
Copyright Protected, ID 08-1567-818-05
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France 

Written August 05, 2023
For the International Contest, Creative Writing Prompt
Sponsor, Sotto Poet, Judged 09/01/2023

First Place

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I was invited to a party in an upscale place, the first thing I knocked over was a fancy vase; feeling too clumsy I was looking for the way out, when I smashed an expensive lamp with a shout ! Everything went silent and all eyes were on me, as a lovely translucent lampshade rolled in the debris; staff quickly ran to remove all traces of the scene, I stood staring and soon all was tidy and clean ! My date said you better come and sit down, while I was thinking that soon- I will be having a meltdown; then, a lady with a big nose said are you the girl who writes, those sad poems, oh, why not write of life's delights ! I wanted to answer her but she kept talking, so depressing, mind you, your writing I am not knocking; as she went on and on each word left a wound and a bruise, the hurtful insults even left marks on my beloved muse ! I stood up suddenly and excused myself too quickly, because at this point I was indeed feeling sickly; finding my date and I made an excuse quite convincing, I lied to him, of course, definitely, positively wincing ! I could not get away from that party, that place fast enough, on the verge of tears- oh, why am I not more tough; but an inner voice was speaking ... write what's in your soul, and just leave the nasty people to their rude rigmarole !

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Date: 9/2/2023 10:27:00 AM
Nice poem. Forget nasty people. Great win.
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Constance La France
Date: 9/5/2023 5:25:00 AM
Jay, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem and win
Date: 9/2/2023 1:47:00 AM
Sad, your party ended upon a sad note, but you emerged resilient and determind to ignore rude comments and reactions and focus on your passion. Congratulations Constance on your well deserved first place win.
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Constance La France
Date: 9/5/2023 5:26:00 AM
Valsa, thank you so much for the comment, and congratulations
Date: 9/1/2023 5:02:00 PM
Constance, Congratulations on winning the contest with your beautifully written poem. Your poem is filled with deep thoughts and vivid descriptions, which brings the imagery to life.
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Constance La France
Date: 9/5/2023 5:26:00 AM
Sotto, thank you so much for the congratulations, compliment and comment
Date: 9/1/2023 4:50:00 PM
Constance, what a fantastic story. So deserving of your win. Saw contest last night. I wrote mine in 10 min, trying to get the last spot in contest. Getting a placement thrilled me as much as your must have thrilled you. Again my friend, Congrats!
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Constance La France
Date: 9/5/2023 5:27:00 AM
Barbara, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem and win
Date: 9/1/2023 2:01:00 PM
Back with congratulations. I loved reading this one again. Have a wonderful day with your win..............
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Constance La France
Date: 9/5/2023 5:28:00 AM
Paula, thank you so much for the congratulations and comment
Date: 8/15/2023 7:51:00 PM
Simply fabulous! I was laughing from the start, priceless, Constance! Reminded me of Pretty Woman. Warm wishes
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Constance La France
Date: 8/15/2023 10:44:00 PM
Anaya, thank you so much for the compliment and comment, I tried to bring out my humour, wishes and blessings !
Date: 8/5/2023 12:18:00 PM
I don't usually read stories but the rhyming caught me. And for a moment I was in real life. and I say the picture of yourself. And the poetry had made itself.
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Constance La France
Date: 8/5/2023 1:17:00 PM
Situation, thank you so much for reading, appreciate and for the lovely comment, blessings !
Date: 8/5/2023 12:11:00 PM
A wonderful story/write/ending. I Love It. I also wrote on this one. Have a blessed day/week.................
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Constance La France
Date: 8/5/2023 1:17:00 PM
Paula, thank you so much for the compliment and comment, blessings !

Book: Shattered Sighs