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The Unrecognizable

She had a face, a beautiful face, With eyes as bright as the moonlight, Ultimately leading her to a new light. Her face grew hideous and weak, Her attitude becoming dull, old, and bleak. Her mere existence feeling like a bomb, Her demeanor no longer old and calm. Her echoes grew distant, foggy, and measly, Her disconnection shattered me deeply. He was a good, hardworking man, Who ran the wrong side of the tracks. The pain inside attacks, Setting him toward a dark and twisted path. Of blind confusion and conformity, Becoming his ultimate deformity. His blind disconnection, Making my soul feel abnormally. The two pass each other on the street, Just a glare, they both let out a small flare. The two walked on past each other, Both completely unrecognizable. My soul collapsed, praying for the new dawn, Hoping this one would soon be gone.

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Date: 3/17/2025 7:30:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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