The Unquiet Grave

"Can you feel the soul of an abandoned house; can you hear the whispering?" 
                                                               Quote by - Constance La France

Why did these bedeviled bats 
fly right into the windows?

An abandoned house
standing forlorn 
amid a desolate landscape 
with its window panes shattered
relating a story of one foreboding night
when these bats splattered their blood 
on the shards of glass
strewn all over the blighted floor.  

These nocturnal creatures, skilled
at navigating a labyrinth of caves,
what drove them to their gruesome fate?
Alas, if only these broken windows 
or the bloody shards of glass can tell the tale.

Maybe, as the tale is being told,
It's the tragic tale of star-crossed 
lovers who were pursued, persecuted 
and thrown into an oubliette
never to see the light of day.
 
Why does love exact such a dreadful wage?

Was it their lost souls that 
spooked the birds to their death?
Ha, if only these grimy walls can breathe in 
even a dismal whisper of the past.


~05/29/23
~Contest: Writing Challenge
~Sponsor: Constance La France.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 6/7/2023 9:38:00 PM
Spooky! Congratulations on your win, with this excellent piece of poetry, Abdul
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Date: 6/6/2023 5:13:00 AM
- A pleasure to read this top winning poem ... congratulations, Abdul -
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Date: 6/6/2023 4:15:00 AM
Congratulations on this winner in Constance's contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara
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Date: 6/3/2023 6:49:00 PM
Abdul, thank you for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations and well done !
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