The Universe No One Knows But Me

Starlit moments on the heart
lost in space across all time and essence 
Planets turn, stars shine 
and the quietude of space,  
resembles my own beating heart...
Blue sapphire dreams violet wishes, 
beneath the tarp of heaven 
Inside the milky way the light of the breath 
softly blowing, 
like dessert winds, on a wild summer day...
Soaring higher then the eagles, 
flying straight into the galaxy 
I hear the resounding echoes of silence 
and I smile, for here in this wonderful haven,   
only the angels seem to exist ! 
Piano keys and red red wine, I sip slowly,
the April moments of a lifetime, 
and when December comes 
I will float across the Universe as if I were 
a beautiful snowflake, 
falling falling falling  
into His love and grace. 
Silence kisses me and suddenly, 
I am more than the sum of all my years  
less then the stars and moon. 
I sit and wait, into the ether of my being 
love grows and flows into my veins, 
no one knows, ...but me.
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M  Avatar
October 14, 2025 at 5:35 AM
Belated Congratulations Rose on your beautiful poems POTD accolade! Debx
Cunningham Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 12:56 AM
Well deserving of today's POTD honour Vie, congratulations. Tom
George Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 11:43 PM
Great imagery ! Heavenly moments forged in wonderful imagination! Congratulations Rose on your well deserved POTD honor.
Loving Iii Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 5:23 PM
Heavenly
Freie Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 5:09 PM
Now the rest of us know it too, these starlit moments with you, in a wink of an eye, with the eagles you fly, and sprinkle your sparkling dew. Congrats on Soup of the Day!
Anaya Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 3:02 PM
Profound energy, immense imagery,. A good & kindness of your heart. Congratulations on POTD Mystic Rose Rose! Blessings
Nicole Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 2:32 PM
' I will float across the Universe as if I were a beautiful snowflake. ' Such a lovely comparison Vienna, because we're all unique. You paint so many amazing images with your words. Congratulations my sweet friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. : ) Hugs, Brandy
Read Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 12:50 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved POTD Rose God bless you.
Messina Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 9:41 AM
Really nice, Vie. Congratulations on POTD!
DiMino Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 9:02 AM
"beneath the tarp of heaven Inside the milky way the light of the breath" -- love that, perfect. "when December comes I will float across the Universe as if I were a beautiful snowflake," -- wonderful imagery. "love grows and flows into my veins, no one knows, ...but me." Very beautiful! Congratulations. Well deserved POTD!
Goldsmith Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 8:31 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your beautiful/ wonderful write. Great Ending... Have a Blessed day writing away.........
Delaney Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 8:22 AM
Beautiful. Congratulations on being POTD,
Rodgers Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 6:56 AM
Dear Rose, Congrats on a POTD that is absolutely beautiful. You managed to capture the vastness of the cosmos and shrink it down into the most intimate, beating space, your heart, a glass of red wine, and a quiet smile. It feels like such a wonderful, secret journey of the universe only you know. It’s magical. Autumn Blessings, Dear Rose, Daniel
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 4:18 AM
returning to congratulate you on your POTD designation for this spiritually 'scrumptious' poem.
Jones Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 4:00 AM
Beautiful work from a beautiful heart! Congratulations on potd!
Kitchin Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 3:05 AM
Vie, a beautiful spiritual poem. Congratulations on POTD.
Rose  Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 3:51 AM
So good to see you here Tania, hope your keeping well, sending love and prayers your way today
Seeker Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 2:35 AM
Oh wow! An outstanding spiritual write, Mystic Rose, soulful and sublime! Warmest congratulations on POTD.
Rose  Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 3:49 AM
Thank you for your visit here I know we share spirituality in common lol
Andresen Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 1:45 AM
- A beautiful poem, Vie Rose :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. ... enjoy :) - hugs
Rose  Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 3:47 AM
thank you dear Anne, thinking of you wish there was more time in the day to spend more time on site lol I appreciate your visit :)
Edmonds  Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 12:52 AM
Beautiful poetry Rose, congratulations on having received the honour of poem of the day… Beryl
Rose  Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 3:44 AM
Thank you dear Beryl, much appreciated, this is so unexpected !
Rolland Avatar
October 7, 2025 at 1:40 AM
so touching and deep poetry, everyone hopes while reading, thanks for the jewel
Rose  Avatar
October 7, 2025 at 6:35 PM
Your so welcome dear Yann, thanks for the lovely comment
Delegans Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 8:57 PM
Really enjoyed this one. I especially liked the lines: I am more than the sum of all my years less then the stars and moon. Beautiful poem!
Rose  Avatar
October 7, 2025 at 6:33 PM
Glad you appreciate the poem dear Christopher, I will be sure to drop in and read some of your poem too !
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 5:36 PM
so many beautiful and flowing lines....captured my heart and soul...especially liked "I will float across the Universe as if I were a beautiful snowflake, falling falling falling hugs & blessings sara
Rose  Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 6:44 PM
Ah, you have the heart of a poet dear Sara, you make every thing beautiful, even other people's poems, love
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 3:13 PM
Hello Mystic Rose, Rose, wow! I enjoyeHJugs. /Darlene/d this poem ikt will be my fav.
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 7, 2025 at 10:51 AM
Hello Mystic Rose, Rose, Your welcome . Hugs. /Darlene/
Rose  Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 6:43 PM
I'm glad it got to your dear heart Darlene, thank you for the lovely comment, be well
Steinmetz Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 1:40 PM
This is so beautiful and vivid! Mysterious too. Awesome job!
Rose  Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 6:43 PM
Glad you enjoyed it dear Rachel, will look forward to your poetry too :)
Derden Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 1:31 PM
This is a beautiful and deeply personal poem! It takes the vastness of the cosmos and successfully transforms it into an intimate, spiritual, and emotional landscape. The imagery—from "blue sapphire dreams" to the heartbeat resembling the "quietude of space"—is particularly striking.
Rose  Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 6:42 PM
thank you so much for this wonderful comment dear Danny, I am looking forward to reading some of your poetry too
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