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The Undying Truth

when life becomes unbearable for one second more ~ immortal be If I Were Immortal Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Anoucheka Gangabissoon Syllable counter PS (17) 24/04/22

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Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/24/2022 9:44:00 AM

So true David, when you're up against it time seems to stop but when you're enjoying yourself it flies, as I'm finding out. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/24/2022 10:50:00 AM

Your so right Tom, immortality is a human concept on life, as felt from our mortal perspective, but spiritually it has a completely different meaning, that I do not understand, anyway I’m delighted you’re enjoying life, cheers David