The Unchangeables - Potw

lasting... 
all through your life, dear child, 
the following crucial life lessons... 

let go of the things 
you cannot change; 
all things beyond your control.
the past lies decayed 
in your rearview mirror.
don't look back!
never mind
that "T" left uncrossed, 
that "I" without a dot on top;
all the wrongs not righted.
don't look back!
never mind 
what you regretfully did, 
what was done to you,
what opportunities you missed.
focus on the present
and mine diamonds out of it.
don't dwell 
on mistakes you've made;
they're supposed to be made.
do not lose sleep 
the over opinions of others.
you have no control 
over how people perceive you;
do not lose sleep! 
let it go... 
look forward.
the future awaits you.
you can never predict 
what it has in store. 
there's no telling 
how the order of things will go, 
how moments, events; 
life, in general, will play out.
look forward nevertheless! 

just keep busy living, 
breathing, and let
the unchangeables all go.


Poem of the week on 03/18/2023

Writing Challenge - L words - Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by Constance La France
Theme chosen: Lasting
Date written: 03/14/2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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La France Avatar
April 3, 2023 at 3:04 PM
Edward, wonderful writing and thank you for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE WEEK honor !
Ibeh Avatar
April 5, 2023 at 7:21 AM
Thank you very much for the congratulations and my placement, dear Constance :-) Most obliged.
Baker Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 5:07 PM
Excellent advice, Edward. I totally agree. Congratulations on your POTW honor. Enjoy your special recognition! Bill
Ibeh Avatar
April 5, 2023 at 7:20 AM
Thank you very much, Bill:-) Most appreciated.
Kauffman Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 11:06 AM
Edward, congratulations on your win and your POTW! Wisdom and love flow from each life through your well spoken admonitions. This would make a wonderful poster! Blessings on the work of your hands my friend!
Ibeh Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 1:14 PM
Thank you very much indeed, Sam:-)
Seeker Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 6:19 AM
Oozing positivity, superb counsel, dear Edward ~ congratulations on POTW
Ibeh Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 1:05 PM
Thank you very much, Seeker:-)
Pandit Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 5:15 AM
Back with BIG congrats on POTW, Edward. A well deserved recognition for this meaningful poem.
Ibeh Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 1:06 PM
Thanks again, Vijay!:-)
Ray Choudhury Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 4:50 AM
Ahhh...what a beautiful poem! And how powerful! Truly we spend too much time and energy on looking back, and heaving a sigh! Congratulations on POTD, Dear Poet - highly deserved!
Ibeh Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 1:10 PM
Thank you very much for the visit, comments and congrats, Mala:-)
Chuuk Avatar
March 20, 2023 at 7:21 PM
Back to congratulate you on POTW, Edward. So awesome! :)
Ibeh Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 1:05 PM
Thanks again, Fin!:-)
Anaya Avatar
March 20, 2023 at 3:09 PM
Life Lessons--"Lasting" -yours is a powerful write with a powerful message needed to be heard. Edward Ibeh, congratulations on POTW!
Ibeh Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 1:12 PM
Thank you very much, Anaya:-)
Meadows Avatar
March 20, 2023 at 12:28 AM
Congratulations on your POTW. Well done.
Ibeh Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 1:11 PM
Thank you so much, Jeanette:-)
Watt Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 7:52 PM
You have the mind and the message of a true poet, and this message is worthy of passing along from one generation to the next. Blessings to you, and congrats for your wonderful POTW!
Ibeh Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 1:04 PM
That's quite a compliment, John:-) Thank you very much!
Nicole Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 6:19 PM
Edward, this is beautiful in every way. Such a wonderful message to embrace and follow. It's best to look forward, instead of behind, and to let go of the things you cannot change. Your thoughts caress softly around me and my heart. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Week. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
Ibeh Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 1:08 PM
Thank you very much for the wonderful feedback and congratulations, Brandy:-)
Volumes Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 12:47 PM
Congrats.. but such wisdom deserves POTY.
Ibeh Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 1:13 PM
Thank you so much, Wendy:-)
Goldsmith Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 7:52 AM
Back with congratulations on your POTW win. Hooray!!! Love It. Have a Great/Blessed~~day/week.............
Ibeh Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 12:14 PM
Thank you so much, Paula:-)
Fowler Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 7:32 AM
I am back Edward, with huge congratulations on this well-deserved Poem of the Week! :)
Ibeh Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 11:15 AM
Thanks again, Linda:-) Most appreciated.
Kitchin Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 4:13 AM
Ed, a great poem and message, congratulations on POTW!
Ibeh Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 11:15 AM
Thank you very much, Tania:-)
Cunningham Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 2:21 AM
POTW, well deserved too Edward, congratulations. Tom
Ibeh Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 11:18 AM
Thank you very much, Tom:-)
Edmonds  Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 1:43 AM
Such good advice for everyone to follow Edward. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the week… Belle
Ibeh Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 11:18 AM
Thank you very much indeed, Belle:-)
Fowler Avatar
March 17, 2023 at 7:20 AM
Wonderful advise so sweetly written in this one Edward. Congratulations on your win! :)
Ibeh Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 11:11 AM
Thank you so much, Linda:-)
Alex Avatar
March 17, 2023 at 7:20 AM
A very beautifully written poem in the form of valuable advises. great work. Congratulations!
Ibeh Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 11:12 AM
Thank you very much, Christuraj:-)
Goldsmith Avatar
March 16, 2023 at 9:15 AM
Your "Lasting" is a powerful write. Where was this years ago??? Good luck. FAV. Have a blessed day................
Ibeh Avatar
March 16, 2023 at 8:20 PM
Thank you very much for the feedback and fave, Paula:-)
Daniel Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 6:57 AM
Great advice, Edward:)
Ibeh Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 7:34 AM
Thank you, Jo!
Volumes Avatar
March 14, 2023 at 3:45 PM
Wow. .......... Nope, cant say any more, OK well mabe one more more word ....... Favorite
Ibeh Avatar
March 14, 2023 at 4:16 PM
Thank you very much for the wonderful feedback and the fave, Wendy:-) Most appreciated.
Pandit Avatar
March 14, 2023 at 12:07 PM
Words of wisdom you convey in this potent write, Edward. Much to gleam throughout--lessons to live by.
Ibeh Avatar
March 14, 2023 at 1:46 PM
Thank you so much, Vijay:-)
Andresen Avatar
March 14, 2023 at 11:40 AM
- Move on ... don't turn around - A great poem, Edward - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Ibeh Avatar
March 14, 2023 at 1:46 PM
Thank you very much, Anne-Lise:-)
Chuuk Avatar
March 14, 2023 at 8:29 AM
Inspiring write, Edward. How true we dwell on our past, and your advice is well received. Thank you for sharing :)
Ibeh Avatar
March 14, 2023 at 10:18 AM
Thank you very much, Fin:-)
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