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The Unbelievers

There are some who say there’s no redemption and we mustn’t waste time with this deception There’s nothing we can do but move on and perhaps we can see another dawn There is no absolution for our indiscretions and our past is past no need for our confessions They ask, “are we to blame for the stain in us?” No type of repentance can remove this pus These desperate people have no hope and every day they walk the tightrope Death smiles at each of us they say whether you are straight or gay No need to waste your time pretending that there is something worth defending They say that no amount of praying will ever save us from displaying The putrid stain that keeps us craving

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 12/24/2018 7:52:00 AM
Ahhh, original sin is the concept that binds us to this Earth but there are a million ways to leave it. Your faith is evident for all to see.
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Lunita Blanca
Date: 12/24/2018 10:54:00 AM
Phil, perhaps we can succeed when death rocks our second childhood to sleep in the cradle of the coffin.
Date: 12/17/2018 8:37:00 PM
yes...the religious walk a very tight rope
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Lunita Blanca
Date: 12/18/2018 8:48:00 AM
As humans, we hang on.

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