The Unbelievers

There are some who say there’s no redemption
and we mustn’t waste time with this deception

There’s nothing we can do but move on
and perhaps we can see another dawn

There is no absolution for our indiscretions
and our past is past no need for our confessions

They ask, “are we to blame for the stain in us?”
No type of repentance can remove this pus

These desperate people have no hope
and every day they walk the tightrope

Death smiles at each of us they say
whether you are straight or gay 

No need to waste your time pretending
that there is something worth defending

They say that no amount of praying
will ever save us from displaying

The putrid stain that keeps us craving
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Capitano Avatar
December 24, 2018 at 7:52 AM
Ahhh, original sin is the concept that binds us to this Earth but there are a million ways to leave it. Your faith is evident for all to see.
Blanca Avatar
December 24, 2018 at 10:54 AM
Phil, perhaps we can succeed when death rocks our second childhood to sleep in the cradle of the coffin.
Blown Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 8:37 PM
yes...the religious walk a very tight rope
Blanca Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 8:48 AM
As humans, we hang on.
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