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The Typewriter

Some winter day,
In Orson's realm...
Or was it just a film?

One Paris night,
Along The Seine streams...
Or was it in my dreams?

I saw them, spies,
I heard all the cries...
Or had I been dreaming?

A machine gun
Would not stop to run...
Or was it still this film?

I woke up, then,
To grab a new pen...
Could THAT all make MY film?

The typewriter
let her fingers run...
WHO'LL STOP THIS MACHINE GUN!?

(Written on 04/27/2013)

Copyright © Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday | Year Posted 2013

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Lucilla Carrillo Date: 10/23/2013 5:10:00 PM THIS IS VERY NICLY WRITTEN AND I enjoyed it very much. Thanks for sharing. Blessings.... Lucilla Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/3/2013 10:27:00 PM Aha, I HAVE met you before. I see that I had commented to this one and you replied to my comment several months ago. I will say goodnight to you now! Login to Reply Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday Date: 10/7/2013 12:17:00 PM Thanks for coming so often to pay a visit to my poems and add new comments, dear Andrea! It"s true that the mood of the day can change our interpretation of a text we "ve already known before; and suddenly comes a new image, a new aspect, new sounds and new colours! So, you are welcome at any time! Hugs, Hanitra

Delysia Hendricks Date: 5/16/2013 7:26:00 AM Cool ending, my friend. I like poems with a good punchline and this is it. Lovely writing. :-) Login to Reply Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday Date: 10/4/2013 9:06:00 AM I can't help punching at anything, any thought, anyone coming across; for fun and play... off curse!(^_^) Have a nice time, Lysia, and many many thanks for the read!

Joseph May Date: 5/10/2013 3:47:00 PM nicely penned...best wishes in the contest Login to Reply Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday Date: 10/4/2013 9:13:00 AM On my way to pay a visit to your latest poems, dear Joseph! Thanks for the read!

Harry Horsman Date: 5/1/2013 3:08:00 AM so visual so creative,,, Login to Reply Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday Date: 5/5/2013 3:34:00 AM Thanks so much for your visit, Harry! Have a nice weekend! Love, Hanitra

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/28/2013 1:53:00 AM I sure like how you picked up speed and started writing like crazy at the end. COOL. Login to Reply Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday Date: 5/5/2013 3:45:00 AM Hi, Andrea! Happy that you got the message! I'm not always that sure that the images are expressive enough and your comments help a lot! Thank you very much for your visit and GOOD LUCK for the contest! You wrote a nice text as always! Love, Hanitra

Richard Lamoureux Date: 4/27/2013 6:44:00 PM I just love it! So creative. Hugs Rick. I am honored you like my form. Login to Reply Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday Date: 4/27/2013 7:14:00 PM It has right away been a real pleasure, Rick! Just from the beginning! I love this rhythm and the concept is so simple, you are such a genius! Thank you for this uplifting visit! Have a nice weekend! Love, Hanitra