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The Twelfth of Never

Some say the twelfth of never is an awfully long time Like infinity multiplied many times over by infinity How long it takes to find just the appropriate rhyme When my oldest son will establish a solid identity. A young lad, like me, longed for Christmas in May Wondered if his school days would ever come to an end, The nine months our parents waited for our birthing day How long it will take for a festering family rift to mend. The twelfth of never is an awfully long time, I suppose Stretching beyond the measures of time and space So, in all seriousness, with permission may I propose That we practice patience and greet every day with grace. FOURTH PLACE WINNER Written on November 24, 2020 For the Pick-a-Title Contest Sponsored by Edward Ibeh

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Date: 12/2/2020 11:47:00 AM
I love the way you ended this wonderful poem, LMilton:-) Amen to that! Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Date: 12/1/2020 6:24:00 AM
Hi LMilton! I remind myself to practice patience every day. ;) Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 11/25/2020 6:56:00 PM
Every day with grace, what a great idea, life would be so much better if we remembered this, dear poet. Thanks for sharing Milton,
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/26/2020 6:41:00 PM
Thanks, Pixie Dust. So true. I keep trying....
Date: 11/24/2020 11:01:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this, especially this admonition from your concluding line: "That we practice patience and greet every day with grace." Thanks likewise for my placement in your recently-judged contest. God bless you.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/26/2020 6:41:00 PM
Your placement was well-earned. Thanks so much for your comments on my poem!
Date: 11/24/2020 10:35:00 PM
...good idea....each jump in the car calls for traffic patience....per mission....gettin oldt......stan sand
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Date: 11/24/2020 5:17:00 PM
You have created such a clever poem. I enjoyed your consistency.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/26/2020 6:42:00 PM
Thanks, Caren. I do try to be "consistent," but I'm not sure how often I succeed. I really appreciated your comment.

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