The Tunnel-Visual 1

Doubt hangs
On shadows still
Despair lingers on leaves
Beyond the path is sanity
Waiting


Originally

Contest-All American Beauty
Prompt-Visual 1
Date-1/11/2015
Sponsor-Andrea Dietrich


Contest: 15
Sponsored by: Casarah Nance

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 10/31/2015 12:23:00 AM
:) congrats on this poem once again. SKAT
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Date: 10/28/2015 12:29:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Greg. Regards, Viv
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Date: 10/28/2015 12:05:00 AM
Congrats on superb win Greg with this amazing write!
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Date: 2/1/2015 2:32:00 PM
GREG, CONGRATULATIONS on your win *Love Sweet* SKAT
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Date: 1/28/2015 11:14:00 AM
Amazing how we all see something just a bit different...Congrats..the last line is perfect. BG
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Date: 1/28/2015 10:10:00 AM
So much conveyed in so few words...an amazing write, Greg. Congrats to you!! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 1/26/2015 12:40:00 PM
!!! : > )...Way to go..Sara
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Date: 1/25/2015 7:27:00 PM
Outstanding, my friend!! Congrats on a great win!... Hugs, Arlene
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Date: 1/25/2015 3:36:00 PM
that middle line for me was outstanding. I didn't see the picture as being melancholy, so I enjoyed your fresh take on the picture. Marvelous poem. congrats in my contest.
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Greg Hoffman
Date: 1/25/2015 6:26:00 PM
Thank you very much and thanks for having this contest.It was fun to write a poem again
Date: 1/25/2015 2:41:00 PM
Powerfully expressed, Greg! So befitting the visual you chose! Congratulations! #7 paul
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Date: 1/25/2015 2:24:00 PM
I like the depth of this one. Congrats.
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Date: 1/25/2015 1:40:00 PM
Beautiful write Greg many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/11/2015 6:23:00 PM
Powerful, brilliant piece! Excellent write, Greg! Pandita
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