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The Tunnel-Visual 1

Doubt hangs On shadows still Despair lingers on leaves Beyond the path is sanity Waiting Originally Contest-All American Beauty Prompt-Visual 1 Date-1/11/2015 Sponsor-Andrea Dietrich Contest: 15 Sponsored by: Casarah Nance

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Skat A

Date: 10/31/2015 12:23:00 AM

:) congrats on this poem once again. SKAT

Viv Wigley

Date: 10/28/2015 12:29:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Greg. Regards, Viv

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/28/2015 12:05:00 AM

Congrats on superb win Greg with this amazing write!

Skat A

Date: 2/1/2015 2:32:00 PM

GREG, CONGRATULATIONS on your win *Love Sweet* SKAT

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 1/28/2015 11:14:00 AM

Amazing how we all see something just a bit different...Congrats..the last line is perfect. BG

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 1/28/2015 10:10:00 AM

So much conveyed in so few words...an amazing write, Greg. Congrats to you!! Hugs, Rhonda

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/26/2015 12:40:00 PM

!!! : > )...Way to go..Sara

Arlene Smith

Date: 1/25/2015 7:27:00 PM

Outstanding, my friend!! Congrats on a great win!... Hugs, Arlene

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/25/2015 3:36:00 PM

that middle line for me was outstanding. I didn't see the picture as being melancholy, so I enjoyed your fresh take on the picture. Marvelous poem. congrats in my contest.

Greg Hoffman
Date: 1/25/2015 6:26:00 PM