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The Truth Stood Downcast In the Lie


The truth stood downcast in the lie;
she never thought he'd say goodbye.
It all was there in stark, plain sight;
the things he did were just not right.

His promises made her heart fly...
the truth stood downcast in the lie.
She thought she was the only one;
he swore 'forever'...then was done.

His words were gifts for her to hear,
allegiance to her loud and clear.
The truth stood downcast in the lie;
her two-faced liar said goodbye.

So easily he said those things
that fed the comfort true love brings.
But she was blinded, left to sigh...
the truth stood downcast in the lie.


July 31, 2016

~4th Place~
Premiere Contest: Contest No. 232
Sponsor: Brian Strand
Judged: 11/02/2016

1st Place~
Contest: The Truth Stood Downcast In The Lie
Sponsor: John Lawless
Judged: 08/26/2016
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George   Avatar
November 3, 2016 at 4:55 AM
Many congrats on your win with this sensational poem, Sandra. Lainey
Haight Avatar
November 3, 2016 at 7:08 PM
Thank you very much, Lainey! Hugs, Sandra
Medders Tobechi Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 8:12 PM
Almost forgot
Medders Tobechi Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 8:11 PM
Well written verse about a subject I know well, a 7. Congratulations on your placement.
Haight Avatar
November 3, 2016 at 7:08 PM
Thank you very much, Janis, for your supportive and uplifting comment and fine rating! Hugs, Sandra
Bradfield Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 4:27 PM
Excellent and well deserving of the win!! Congratulations..Larry
May Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 1:28 PM
Congrats on your top win Sandra
Leiser Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 11:17 PM
Congrats on your top win, Sandra! Great job :)
Krampe Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 10:13 PM
Congrats on your win, Sandra!
Y. Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 7:29 PM
Hi Sandra, This was a excellent entry for the contest theme. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved. A without doubt seven:-) Alexis
Arnone Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 7:28 PM
Wonderful and deserved win, Andrea. Congrats! :-)
Poteet Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 5:32 PM
Congratulations on a fine interpretation of the prompt, Sandra. It was hard one to meet and you aced it -- Fine Job, Well done
Allison Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 2:26 PM
Many congrats on your top spot Sandra your theme suits that line so perfectly:-) hugs Jan xx
Haight Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 3:08 PM
Thank you very much, Jan. I really like using that form. Hugs, Sandra
Hamilton Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 12:49 PM
Another well deserved top win, congrats Sandra.
Haight Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 3:07 PM
Thank you very much, John. Sandra
Scars Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 10:49 AM
Sandra, another winning worthy poem lady! congrats on your top win :)-luloo
Haight Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 3:07 PM
Thank you, Laura. Hugs, Sandra
U.D Palawon  Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 10:43 AM
Congrats on your first place Sandra. Beautiful quatern. :) Sunita
Haight Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 3:07 PM
Thank you so much, Sunita. Hugs, Sandra
Kendrick Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 9:41 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
Haight Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 3:06 PM
Thank you very much, Sara! Hugs, Sandra
Singh Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 9:22 AM
Well done ,as always! Huge Congrats!
Haight Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 2:54 PM
Thank you so much, Sushma! Sandra
Lawless Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 9:02 AM
Sandra, I found this to read smoothly and easily and the repetitive line an invisible heartbeat. Thanks for entering this in the contest.
Haight Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 2:53 PM
Thank you so much for the great contest, John. I enjoy writing in the Quatern form. I am honored with my awesome placement, and thank you so much! Sandra
Canerdy Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 3:45 PM
A 7 for this excellent quatern, Sandra! Janice
Daniel Avatar
August 1, 2016 at 1:41 AM
Well written, Sandra:) All the best for the contest:)
Haight Avatar
August 2, 2016 at 7:55 PM
Thank you very much, Jo. Hugs, Sandra
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