The True Tale of Jack and Jill

Jack and Jill scrambled up the hill so sheer,

   To fetch his dipsomaniac pa a pail of beer.

      Alas, Jack stumbled creating a frothy spill.

         Facing his furious pop, he blamed it all on Jill!

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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George   Avatar
July 2, 2014 at 8:39 PM
lol!!!! Too funny! I wrote a Limerick with the same title. Thank you for making my day, Bob. bfn Lainie
Vaso Avatar
June 14, 2014 at 9:37 PM
Loved this one, I have been up this hill with no one to blame but myself! Jack was a lucky lad!
Gorelick Avatar
June 14, 2014 at 8:29 PM
We alwlays get blamed for everything. I have to look up dipsomaniac..lol. your doing great tonight. BG
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