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The Trout

I was not in the mood for fishing though i brought all the gear and Settled into my comfortable mode Of tranquil bliss by the edge of the pool But you being the older wiser trout Stirred the stillness of the pool Your proud fin cutting the surface Like a sharpened tool waning and listing Your tail following as you flung yourself Like a trapeze artist with an invisible swing The tree branches hung low overhead Like a circus tent and i with a front rose seats Watched in awe and surprise As if every fish scale glittering in the sun Was a diamond and with your final splash As you arched your torso and disappeared Beneath the blanket of water I cried Tears of joy of love tears of joy of loss And tears of joy of being serenaded by A voiceless wise old trout

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/18/2022 2:04:00 AM
I see i've commented on this, March 2016, so glad to have read it again. Love the poetry, and the wise old trout.
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Date: 2/8/2021 4:17:00 PM
Delightful and most entertaining ~ a pleasure to find your poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology, Kelli
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Kelli White
Date: 9/14/2021 8:31:00 AM
Thank you very much
Date: 4/28/2020 6:54:00 PM
I like the last lines a lot...the "two" tears of joy.
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Kelli White
Date: 4/28/2020 7:51:00 PM
Thank you JHG this was a tribute to a beautiful soul whom I lost to cancer. Love Kelli
Date: 3/31/2020 9:10:00 AM
Congrats on becoming a lifetime Member. This is a pretty first poem.
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Kelli White
Date: 3/31/2020 9:44:00 AM
Thank you very much RL, it took some time to commit , but it is healthy to write. Love kelli
Date: 3/8/2016 11:21:00 AM
Love to see the first poem of a poets posting here on soup, and wow not disappointed,, wonderful theme, and a very caring mind that penned it.
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Kelli White
Date: 3/8/2016 11:44:00 AM
Thank you very much Harry.
Date: 2/11/2016 10:00:00 AM
Hi Kelli, a vivid picture portrayed in this first write on the Soup. A beautiful piece, how things come and go in our lives but they can leave such feelings of joy within us. Everything that touches us in our lives does stay with us. The wonders of nature Kelli, being sung in poetic image.An excellent write Kelli. This has to be a 7....Vlad.
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Kelli White
Date: 2/11/2016 10:09:00 AM
Thank you very much Vlad. You are absolutely right. I am thankful I see and love beauty in its simplicity
Date: 2/9/2016 3:35:00 PM
They are definitely my favorite. I (used to) love fly fishing for trout. I understand how you felt. Excellent poem.A7
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Kelli White
Date: 2/9/2016 4:56:00 PM
Natures wonders. Thank you very much Daniel
Date: 1/20/2016 1:57:00 PM
You certainly have your own style... I think I could pick out a poem of yours from a collection with no trouble at all. Fabulous phrasing, imagery and metaphor... so many levels of meaning here. It left me yearning for the trout and for the fisherlady! BRAVO Kelli Keith
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Kelli White
Date: 1/20/2016 1:59:00 PM
Ty Keith. You made me blush. The trout too. Haha. Kelli
Date: 7/25/2015 11:36:00 PM
KELLI:) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 7/9/2015 1:08:00 PM
I enjoyed your first offering here Kelli. Welcome to Poetry Soup! Aloha, Connie
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Kelli White
Date: 1/8/2016 11:31:00 PM
Ty Connie I am sorry it took awhile to thank you
Date: 7/8/2015 9:13:00 PM
A lovely piece, Kelli, well done. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I'm sure that you'll find your time here rewarding. Have fun. Viv x
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Kelli White
Date: 1/8/2016 11:31:00 PM
Ty Viv. Sorry it took awhile to ty
Date: 7/8/2015 1:39:00 PM
Hi Kelli, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Kelli White
Date: 1/8/2016 11:30:00 PM
Ty very much skat. Sorry took me awhile to respond.
Date: 7/7/2015 11:24:00 PM
Kelli, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Kelli White
Date: 7/8/2015 11:56:00 AM
Thank you very much. Shall we enjoy our perpetual journey through verse.

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