The Trout

I was not in the mood for fishing 
though i brought all the gear and
Settled into my comfortable mode
Of tranquil bliss by the edge of the pool
But you being the older wiser trout 
Stirred the stillness of the pool 
Your proud fin cutting the surface 
Like a sharpened tool waning and listing 
Your tail following as you flung yourself 
Like a trapeze artist with an invisible swing
The tree branches hung low overhead 
Like a circus tent and i with a front rose seats
Watched in awe and surprise
As if every fish scale glittering in the sun
Was a diamond and with your final splash
As you arched your torso and disappeared 
Beneath the blanket of water I cried
Tears of joy of love tears of joy of loss
And tears of joy of being serenaded by
A voiceless wise old trout
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Horsman Avatar
July 18, 2022 at 2:04 AM
I see i've commented on this, March 2016, so glad to have read it again. Love the poetry, and the wise old trout.
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February 8, 2021 at 4:17 PM
Delightful and most entertaining ~ a pleasure to find your poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology, Kelli
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September 14, 2021 at 8:31 AM
Thank you very much
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April 28, 2020 at 6:54 PM
I like the last lines a lot...the "two" tears of joy.
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April 28, 2020 at 7:51 PM
Thank you JHG this was a tribute to a beautiful soul whom I lost to cancer. Love Kelli
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March 31, 2020 at 9:10 AM
Congrats on becoming a lifetime Member. This is a pretty first poem.
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March 31, 2020 at 9:44 AM
Thank you very much RL, it took some time to commit , but it is healthy to write. Love kelli
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March 8, 2016 at 11:21 AM
Love to see the first poem of a poets posting here on soup, and wow not disappointed,, wonderful theme, and a very caring mind that penned it.
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March 8, 2016 at 11:44 AM
Thank you very much Harry.
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February 11, 2016 at 10:00 AM
Hi Kelli, a vivid picture portrayed in this first write on the Soup. A beautiful piece, how things come and go in our lives but they can leave such feelings of joy within us. Everything that touches us in our lives does stay with us. The wonders of nature Kelli, being sung in poetic image.An excellent write Kelli. This has to be a 7....Vlad.
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February 11, 2016 at 10:09 AM
Thank you very much Vlad. You are absolutely right. I am thankful I see and love beauty in its simplicity
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February 9, 2016 at 3:35 PM
They are definitely my favorite. I (used to) love fly fishing for trout. I understand how you felt. Excellent poem.A7
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February 9, 2016 at 4:56 PM
Natures wonders. Thank you very much Daniel
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January 20, 2016 at 1:57 PM
You certainly have your own style... I think I could pick out a poem of yours from a collection with no trouble at all. Fabulous phrasing, imagery and metaphor... so many levels of meaning here. It left me yearning for the trout and for the fisherlady! BRAVO Kelli Keith
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January 20, 2016 at 1:59 PM
Ty Keith. You made me blush. The trout too. Haha. Kelli
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July 25, 2015 at 11:36 PM
KELLI:) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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July 9, 2015 at 1:08 PM
I enjoyed your first offering here Kelli. Welcome to Poetry Soup! Aloha, Connie
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January 8, 2016 at 11:31 PM
Ty Connie I am sorry it took awhile to thank you
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July 8, 2015 at 9:13 PM
A lovely piece, Kelli, well done. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I'm sure that you'll find your time here rewarding. Have fun. Viv x
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January 8, 2016 at 11:31 PM
Ty Viv. Sorry it took awhile to ty
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July 8, 2015 at 1:39 PM
Hi Kelli, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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January 8, 2016 at 11:30 PM
Ty very much skat. Sorry took me awhile to respond.
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July 7, 2015 at 11:24 PM
Kelli, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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July 8, 2015 at 11:56 AM
Thank you very much. Shall we enjoy our perpetual journey through verse.
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