The Tritest Song

“Renewal…Easter,,,April love…rebirth”
Are easy, archetypal terms for when
Fresh shoots begin to green the thawing Earth
And fill with sweet clichés this poet’s pen.
At least I know what Spring is not—
The “cruelest” month’s not April, no,
In spite of Mister T. S. Elliot
Whose Spring and soul were both of snow.
But he was young.  Age brings surcease,
And Spring, forsythia and daffodils,
As flowered sonnets sprout, increase,
And decorate the rain-swelled rills.
Thus, in the landscape of my autumn brain
The hues of yellow and of green remain.
03-23-83
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Winter Avatar
November 11, 2008 at 8:57 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
Jordan Avatar
November 1, 2008 at 7:07 PM
Steve - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
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October 28, 2008 at 10:21 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
Winter Avatar
October 6, 2008 at 10:10 AM
Congratulations Steve on your beautiful Sonnet being featured this week. Well deserved. Love, Shar
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October 6, 2008 at 7:04 AM
Congratulations Steve on "The Tritest Song" being featured. I have a Summer brain, so I start waiting for Spring right around the first frost. Vince
Jordan Avatar
October 6, 2008 at 2:55 AM
I really enjoyed your Sonnet - Great Job - Congrats on being featured - God Bless
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October 5, 2008 at 5:09 PM
Interesting use of this challenging form. Nice imagery. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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