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The Tree, Absorbed Visual 7

Absorbed, as sun strips slow her gown of midnight blue, caressing warm, the land and sea; the tree. 01/13/15 Contest: An American Beauty: Write like Adelaide Sponsor: Andrea Deitrich

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Skat A

Date: 2/1/2015 2:23:00 PM

ARLENE, CONGRATULATIONS on your win *Love Sweet* SKAT

Tim Smith

Date: 1/28/2015 12:23:00 PM

Congrats Arlene love the alliteration...sun strips slow.: ) ...quite an image...hugs Tim

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 1/28/2015 8:12:00 AM

I love the beauty of your words and use of personification, Arlene...congrats on your win! Hugs, Rhonda

Paul Callus

Date: 1/26/2015 10:58:00 AM

Great imagery, verging on the sensual, Arlene! #7 I love this entry! Congratulations on your win...deserved+ // paul

Earl Schumacker

Date: 1/25/2015 7:58:00 PM

Hi Arlene, Great visuals in your creation. I just now rated you a 7 in the system. You should have scored higher. Congratulations on your excellent poem and win. Earl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/25/2015 4:19:00 PM

Sweet personification, ARlene. Congrats in my contest.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/25/2015 3:40:00 PM

I like how this looks like a tree. Congratulations.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/25/2015 2:49:00 PM

Absolutely beautiful - many congrats on your win Arlene:-) Hugs jan x

Monterey Sirak

Date: 1/21/2015 9:14:00 AM

Do you remember the poem "Trees" by Joyce Kilmer? "I think I shall never see a poem lovely as a tree." Well I did! I did just see a poem lovely as a tree. Right here when I read this little gem.

Arlene Smith
Date: 1/21/2015 5:59:00 PM

How sweet!! Thank you so much, Monterey.. Ashamed to say I never read poetry until I joined poetry soup! You guys are it for me!...

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 1/15/2015 11:18:00 AM

Excellent pen here Arlene! Your imagery is fantastic. The tree, the sunset ,very nice subjects to say some about it. A 7 from me! Have a wonderful day! G L in the contest! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D. ^O^"