Arlene Smith Poet Cinquain

The Tree, Absorbed Visual 7

Absorbed,
as sun strips slow
her gown of midnight blue,
caressing warm, the land and sea;
the tree.




01/13/15
Contest: An American Beauty: Write like Adelaide
Sponsor: Andrea Deitrich

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Skat A February 1, 2015 at 2:23 PM ARLENE, CONGRATULATIONS on your win *Love Sweet* SKAT

Tim Smith January 28, 2015 at 12:23 PM Congrats Arlene love the alliteration...sun strips slow.: ) ...quite an image...hugs Tim

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders January 28, 2015 at 8:12 AM I love the beauty of your words and use of personification, Arlene...congrats on your win! Hugs, Rhonda

Paul Callus January 26, 2015 at 10:58 AM Great imagery, verging on the sensual, Arlene! #7 I love this entry! Congratulations on your win...deserved+ // paul

Earl Schumacker January 25, 2015 at 7:58 PM Hi Arlene, Great visuals in your creation. I just now rated you a 7 in the system. You should have scored higher. Congratulations on your excellent poem and win. Earl

Andrea Dietrich January 25, 2015 at 4:19 PM Sweet personification, ARlene. Congrats in my contest.

Richard Lamoureux January 25, 2015 at 3:40 PM I like how this looks like a tree. Congratulations.

Jan Allison January 25, 2015 at 2:49 PM Absolutely beautiful - many congrats on your win Arlene:-) Hugs jan x

Monterey Sirak January 21, 2015 at 9:14 AM Do you remember the poem "Trees" by Joyce Kilmer? "I think I shall never see a poem lovely as a tree." Well I did! I did just see a poem lovely as a tree. Right here when I read this little gem. Arlene Smith January 21, 2015 at 5:59 PM How sweet!! Thank you so much, Monterey.. Ashamed to say I never read poetry until I joined poetry soup! You guys are it for me!...

Dorian Petersen Potter January 15, 2015 at 11:18 AM Excellent pen here Arlene! Your imagery is fantastic. The tree, the sunset ,very nice subjects to say some about it. A 7 from me! Have a wonderful day! G L in the contest! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D. ^O^"