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The Tree, Absorbed Visual 7

Absorbed,
as sun strips slow
her gown of midnight blue,
caressing warm, the land and sea;
the tree.




01/13/15
Contest: An American Beauty: Write like Adelaide
Sponsor: Andrea Deitrich

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Skat A Date: 2/1/2015 2:23:00 PM ARLENE, CONGRATULATIONS on your win *Love Sweet* SKAT Login to Reply

Tim Smith Date: 1/28/2015 12:23:00 PM Congrats Arlene love the alliteration...sun strips slow.: ) ...quite an image...hugs Tim Login to Reply

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 1/28/2015 8:12:00 AM I love the beauty of your words and use of personification, Arlene...congrats on your win! Hugs, Rhonda Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 1/26/2015 10:58:00 AM Great imagery, verging on the sensual, Arlene! #7 I love this entry! Congratulations on your win...deserved+ // paul Login to Reply

Earl Schumacker Date: 1/25/2015 7:58:00 PM Hi Arlene, Great visuals in your creation. I just now rated you a 7 in the system. You should have scored higher. Congratulations on your excellent poem and win. Earl Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/25/2015 4:19:00 PM Sweet personification, ARlene. Congrats in my contest. Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/25/2015 3:40:00 PM I like how this looks like a tree. Congratulations. Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 1/25/2015 2:49:00 PM Absolutely beautiful - many congrats on your win Arlene:-) Hugs jan x Login to Reply

Monterey Sirak Date: 1/21/2015 9:14:00 AM Do you remember the poem "Trees" by Joyce Kilmer? "I think I shall never see a poem lovely as a tree." Well I did! I did just see a poem lovely as a tree. Right here when I read this little gem. Login to Reply Arlene Smith Date: 1/21/2015 5:59:00 PM How sweet!! Thank you so much, Monterey.. Ashamed to say I never read poetry until I joined poetry soup! You guys are it for me!...

Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 1/15/2015 11:18:00 AM Excellent pen here Arlene! Your imagery is fantastic. The tree, the sunset ,very nice subjects to say some about it. A 7 from me! Have a wonderful day! G L in the contest! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D. ^O^" Login to Reply