Notes About The Poem

the treachery of tides

Patient planets on their wheels revolve
they answer not for the treachery of their tides

But we’re made guilty of our own disasters
and we’ll hang by our own lazy geometry.

Our very own hapless crookedness
is reason enough for our bankruptcy 

Oh, we may pretend and invent kinder tales
but in quiet rooms, in privacy, let us confess

that we, ourselves, are the choking strychnine, 
and the muscles controlling the bone-white hand

if we all become handsome skeletons 
who lack marked grave stones 
let’s call it karma.
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A song for this
I Remember the Sun by XTC
Invisible Sun by The Police
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Fallica Avatar
April 13, 2026 at 11:47 PM
Boy! Schopenhauer’s got nothing on you! Or maybe it’s Dr. House. I don’t know. Misanthropy the rage in Paris now? I thought it was Absurdism. Wanna meet for un café at Café de Flore. (Where’s my Gitanes?) / Giving off serious sulking Brigitte Bardot in the pix! / <3
Vionet Avatar
April 14, 2026 at 6:31 AM
Non-crazy Brigitte Bardot, hopefully. We took a series of pictures at a couple of parties. One series came out dark and grainy, but still a very nice effect and this is one of the better lit ones. It’s just a depressing poem, I watched the news - I shouldn’t do that.
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