The Transformation In Me

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July 6, 2023

Contest : Black Country Communion

Sponsor : Robert James Liguori

Inspired by song The Revolution In Me

I tried but could not upload the YouTube video of the song

I’ve sailed the seven seas I’ve smelled heavenly rose scent I’ve fulfilled all my dreams My life no trouble could dent. Now it’s the soul supreme Holding within the divine key Opens the door of inner bliss Brings the transformation in me. The storm I made blew in the forest Felling the trees on its way The new sun rises with promise Spreads the rays of joy on my day. Now it’s the soul supreme Holding within the divine key Opens the door of inner bliss Brings the transformation in me. The hurdles in life’s path I cross Helped by my inherent skill I’ve left my prime days far behind Still have power in my will. Now it’s the soul supreme Holding within the divine key Opens the door of inner bliss Brings the transformation in me. Now it’s my soul that counts Brings the transformation in me Brings the transformation in me.

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Robert James Liguori

Date: 7/23/2023 1:16:00 PM

This is exactly what a song inspired poem should be. Engaging in every which way. Thanks I enjoyed your poem.

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/23/2023 10:39:00 PM

Thank you, Robert for the placement and for your encouraging and gracious comment.

Jay Narain

Date: 7/23/2023 10:55:00 AM

Nice poem. Black county communions are full of song and music. Nice work.

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/23/2023 10:38:00 PM

Thank you for your visit and encouraging comment.

Speaks Volumes

Date: 7/23/2023 4:16:00 AM

Congratulations Subimal. This is a wonderful Poem. I think Black County Communion should use Poetry Soup contestants to write their songs for them !!!!

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/23/2023 10:37:00 PM

Thank you, SV for your visit and for your gracious comment.