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The Train To Wimbledon

With a snakelike hiss, the tangerine train doors close and the engine rock-rumbles forward clicking over each joined metal coupling. Long gone are the pristine days of virginity and the impassioned rush of slick new parts. The small sounds of newspaper pages turning, and whispered phrases penetrate the antiquarian din. As an industrial landscaped melds with the stark spring sunshine through the cars’ graffiti scared glass. The rigid plasticine interior fills at first stop with giggling, rose cheeked girl-children. Herded in single file to the rear of the car, by Moslem matrons wrapped in head scarves. The girls’ blue-plaid, pleated, school skirts, dusted the cobalt seats. Foreign images, our images, reflect Dali-like from British eyes of blue, brown, and green, an American couple on the way to Wimbledon station.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 6/27/2014 8:32:00 PM
This is an amazing poem, Debbie! I love the richly detailed descriptions. They really make the poem come to life, and I was taken there through your words. Congratulations on your well deserved win!
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Date: 6/26/2014 8:12:00 AM
very cool descriptions, You have a unique way of looking at things and it is awesome :) Grats on your win :)
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Date: 6/25/2014 12:20:00 PM
Congrats on a great win, Debbie!.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 6/25/2014 8:38:00 AM
A charming write Debbie...congrats on your win
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Date: 6/25/2014 6:58:00 AM
what a colorful train ride..:) and the stories which are behind everyone in the ride... :) Congratulations Debbie.. :)!, Olive ELoisa here.. :)
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Date: 6/25/2014 3:29:00 AM
Enjoyed your train ride, Debbie. I too have been on similar experiences whenever I go by train in and around London! Congrats on your high placing. // paul
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Date: 6/25/2014 1:31:00 AM
Read and enjoyed the poem. Congrats on the win,
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Date: 6/24/2014 8:47:00 PM
Beautifully done cher and so sadly nostalgic...I remember 10 cent hot dogs and slide-out Coke boxes...You went to Wimbleton?? I'm SO jealous...
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Date: 6/24/2014 8:32:00 PM
Debbie, .. Congratulations!!! Thank you for supporting one of my many contests. I enjoyed every entry! If you like, stop by my latest blog "Never Say Never or my newest poem, THE NEW POET." It's a sweet dedication to every old and new poet. I've come in contact here on this site. Always & Forever ~LINDA
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Date: 1/1/2009 1:41:00 PM
Well conceived and rendered... vivid imagery and rich, descriptive language. (PS thanks for your suggestion on 'Comet;' I changed it!) Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 12/31/2008 4:54:00 PM
great poem nice.....happy new year 2k9 Always Maryam
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