Mike Gentile Poet Rhyme

The Train of Passing Time

I ride the train of passing time
                                as I lay me down
I hear the wheels begin to churn
              around and ’round and ‘round

A first class ticket to the past
                               my pillow is for me
the stops it makes, unlimited  
                         and oh, the fare is free

My wedding day, a sea of white
            the friends who’d gathered near
My first date, that amusement park
                           my roller coaster fear

Then farther back the train rolls on
                 to grandma’s chocolate cake
I only hope I’ll see her smile
                        before it’s time to wake

No worries, as I often ride
                     love’s vouchers to redeem
I know my journeys truly are
               much more than just a dream

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Susan Ashley August 10, 2023 at 9:13 AM Dear Mike, I am enchanted by your exceptional poem. Drifting off to sleep seems to open this wonderful window to reviewing the past. You've captured this experience with soft beauty and poetic finesse. Most of the time, my dream world is comforting and amazing, often featuring visits with loved ones who have passed, and filled with joy! Some I believe to be "much more than just a dream" too! A rich, resonating piece! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Mike Gentile August 10, 2023 at 2:53 PM Nostalgic I am for sure Susan and I love the past with all of its warm memories of love! Thank you for your very kind words, xxoo

Paula Goldsmith August 9, 2023 at 2:40 PM WOW!!! I love this one. I did not know anyone did this but me. Guess we are on the same train and getting off at different stops. Sweet Dreams... Have a great day writing away............. Mike Gentile August 10, 2023 at 4:23 AM We must be kindred spirits Paula!! Happy Travels !!!!! Thank you xxoo

Bj Legros Kelley August 6, 2023 at 9:14 PM Ah Mike, how beautiful. Dreams are amazing. I had a dream of my dad quite a few years back, it felt so real that I remember it still. I was sad to wake from that dream, but so comforted by it. This is a beautiful poem. Mike Gentile August 7, 2023 at 12:50 PM Thank you so much BJ !!!

Warren Doll August 4, 2023 at 8:40 AM Mike, insightful, beautiful, nostalgic poem. I enjoyed it very much. Happy Friday~ Warren Mike Gentile August 5, 2023 at 4:33 AM Warren, thank you so much!!

Panagiota Romios July 31, 2023 at 2:15 PM Hi, Mike, I really like this write. It’s so very soft and touches us. Those lovely moments of our past should be valued. A gorgeous weite a favorite, Pangie Mike Gentile July 31, 2023 at 6:50 PM Pangie, I am so glad that it resonated with you! Thanks so very much xxoo

Kim Rodrigues July 31, 2023 at 6:25 AM So beautiful, Mike! We often make that trip as our heads hit the pillow. Such joyous occasions to remember! God bless you, dear poet! Mike Gentile July 31, 2023 at 6:50 AM That is so true Kim!! thank you so much xxoo

Vijay Pandit July 30, 2023 at 1:20 PM Delightfully reminiscing in memories, Mike. No worries, as I often ride love’s vouchers to redeem I know my journeys truly are much more than just a dream--so well said! Mike Gentile July 30, 2023 at 1:46 PM Thank you Vijay, You are always so nice to comment!! Happy Sunday!!

Darlene De Beaulieu July 30, 2023 at 11:58 AM Hello Mike, Oh a lovely poem. it brought me memories to as I read. My fav, Happy Sunday. xxxx-oooo./Darlene\. Darlene De Beaulieu July 31, 2023 at 9:54 AM Hello Mike, I am glad I made your day bright. Happy Monday. xxxx-oooo./Darlene\ Mike Gentile July 30, 2023 at 12:00 PM I am so happy that you liked it Darlene, Happy Sunday xxoo