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The Train of Passing Time

I ride the train of passing time as I lay me down I hear the wheels begin to churn around and ’round and ‘round A first class ticket to the past my pillow is for me the stops it makes, unlimited and oh, the fare is free My wedding day, a sea of white the friends who’d gathered near My first date, that amusement park my roller coaster fear Then farther back the train rolls on to grandma’s chocolate cake I only hope I’ll see her smile before it’s time to wake No worries, as I often ride love’s vouchers to redeem I know my journeys truly are much more than just a dream

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Susan Ashley

Date: 8/10/2023 9:13:00 AM

Dear Mike, I am enchanted by your exceptional poem. Drifting off to sleep seems to open this wonderful window to reviewing the past. You've captured this experience with soft beauty and poetic finesse. Most of the time, my dream world is comforting and amazing, often featuring visits with loved ones who have passed, and filled with joy! Some I believe to be "much more than just a dream" too! A rich, resonating piece! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/10/2023 2:53:00 PM

Nostalgic I am for sure Susan and I love the past with all of its warm memories of love! Thank you for your very kind words, xxoo

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/9/2023 2:40:00 PM

WOW!!! I love this one. I did not know anyone did this but me. Guess we are on the same train and getting off at different stops. Sweet Dreams... Have a great day writing away.............

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/10/2023 4:23:00 AM

We must be kindred spirits Paula!! Happy Travels !!!!! Thank you xxoo

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 8/6/2023 9:14:00 PM

Ah Mike, how beautiful. Dreams are amazing. I had a dream of my dad quite a few years back, it felt so real that I remember it still. I was sad to wake from that dream, but so comforted by it. This is a beautiful poem.

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/7/2023 12:50:00 PM

Thank you so much BJ !!!

Warren Doll

Date: 8/4/2023 8:40:00 AM

Mike, insightful, beautiful, nostalgic poem. I enjoyed it very much. Happy Friday~ Warren

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/5/2023 4:33:00 AM

Warren, thank you so much!!

Panagiota Romios

Date: 7/31/2023 2:15:00 PM

Hi, Mike, I really like this write. It’s so very soft and touches us. Those lovely moments of our past should be valued. A gorgeous weite a favorite, Pangie

Mike Gentile
Date: 7/31/2023 6:50:00 PM

Pangie, I am so glad that it resonated with you! Thanks so very much xxoo

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/31/2023 6:25:00 AM

So beautiful, Mike! We often make that trip as our heads hit the pillow. Such joyous occasions to remember! God bless you, dear poet!

Mike Gentile
Date: 7/31/2023 6:50:00 AM

That is so true Kim!! thank you so much xxoo

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/30/2023 1:20:00 PM

Delightfully reminiscing in memories, Mike. No worries, as I often ride love’s vouchers to redeem I know my journeys truly are much more than just a dream--so well said!

Mike Gentile
Date: 7/30/2023 1:46:00 PM

Thank you Vijay, You are always so nice to comment!! Happy Sunday!!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/30/2023 11:58:00 AM

Hello Mike, Oh a lovely poem. it brought me memories to as I read. My fav, Happy Sunday. xxxx-oooo./Darlene\.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/31/2023 9:54:00 AM

Hello Mike, I am glad I made your day bright. Happy Monday. xxxx-oooo./Darlene\

Mike Gentile
Date: 7/30/2023 12:00:00 PM

I am so happy that you liked it Darlene, Happy Sunday xxoo