Get Your Premium Membership

The Toymaker

The Toymakers Toy I thought once Pinocchios strings had been cut, his wooden body turned to flesh and he became ‘real’ Yet, I have been cut loose from my strings, only to be left feeling numb, and raw? I feel as though I have landed, like a twig that’s been thrown by a child. And am now, Just Waiting Waiting, to be trodden on. I was gifted a voice, by the fairy godmother herself. But given no volume Or words to speak. My ears however, have to listen. my eyes unable to close, my control centre never sleeps, My tastebuds completely frozen. My vunerable heart, placed outside of my chest. With no love or protection, Just the echo of my masters voice. The clinking of chains Secured to my wrists, clogging My arteries, And, Starving my veins. each breath is harder, like grissle that's been gnawed, straight off a bone, By a ferocious beast. A broken toy, with a soul. that is wanting to be real. To find Giuseppe and be loved, not wooden with strings.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/13/2020 10:35:00 AM
....p.s....i have enjoyed your writes! Enveloped them! much love, jamez
Login to Reply
Stevenson Avatar
Mockingbird Stevenson
Date: 5/13/2020 6:53:00 PM
Hi James, Thankyou so much for your words of encouragement and support. Have a Happy Wednesday! Big smiles, Mockingbird.
Date: 5/13/2020 8:23:00 AM
you need to write more, i rarely express this encouragement, yet, i really believe you have the gift of write....i c that you have 2 years distance from sharing your gift hear... not cool denying those who enjoy (after scrounging through the thousands of babblers here) the writes of an au courant scribe! have a great journey...much love. james
Login to Reply
Date: 2/4/2019 7:16:00 PM
I hear and feel the sadness of your heart. You are tremendously skilled at writing your heart. I also hear and feel the passion and strength of your soul within every word written. Showing people how to stand. Very beautiful writing I hope that you will read my Psalms of humidity Facebook page I write to try and help the world around me I would love to know your thoughts on truth and love.
Login to Reply
Stevenson Avatar
Mockingbird Stevenson
Date: 5/13/2020 6:54:00 PM
Thankyou for such kind words and support. Big smiles, Mockingbird
Date: 12/7/2018 8:44:00 PM
A poem of such longing; -JT
Login to Reply
Stevenson Avatar
Mockingbird Stevenson
Date: 5/13/2020 6:55:00 PM
It is Indeed. Big smiles , thanks JT.
Date: 10/27/2018 3:05:00 AM
lovely piece Mockingbird, so well penned with good imagery and insightful thought. Have great day, Gordon
Login to Reply
Date: 10/24/2018 10:41:00 AM
To think there are so many broken toys out there in the wide world, yet here, we have one with a soul, and a wonderful intellect, a mind that pushes it's pen to the limit...then to bring all the emotions to the reader,,,This is truly lovely...
Login to Reply
Date: 10/22/2018 2:24:00 PM
Love this, Mockingbird! Very well written...H x Charlie
Login to Reply
Date: 10/20/2018 7:07:00 PM
Awesome and oh so aesthetic. There is a tear in these words. A yearning.
Login to Reply
Date: 10/20/2018 1:42:00 AM
Sad. I hope the fairground will be finding its way. A voice with no volume, ouch. This is well written, Kai
Login to Reply
Date: 10/19/2018 4:34:00 PM
A fanciful write that fascinated me.
Login to Reply
Stevenson Avatar
Mockingbird Stevenson
Date: 12/3/2018 6:37:00 AM
Thanks Rob, I appreciate the kind words! H
Date: 10/17/2018 8:04:00 AM
- A great and touching writing, Mockingbird :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Stevenson Avatar
Mockingbird Stevenson
Date: 12/3/2018 6:37:00 AM
Thanks Miss Sunshine! Big smiles, H
Date: 10/17/2018 2:30:00 AM
I love the metaphorical beauty of this expressive and emotional poem, M.S. The feeling of longing is strong and sincere. ~ Regards // paul
Login to Reply
Stevenson Avatar
Mockingbird Stevenson
Date: 10/22/2018 7:46:00 AM
Thanks for the feedback Paul. I am a big fan of your work so appreciate it a lot. Big smiles, x
Date: 10/16/2018 11:31:00 PM
Oh! touches me - A broken toy, with a soul. /// beautiful poem
Login to Reply
Stevenson Avatar
Mockingbird Stevenson
Date: 10/22/2018 7:45:00 AM
Thankyou for taking the time to stop by and have a read! Big smiles, Mockingbird x
Date: 10/16/2018 8:55:00 PM
From beginning to end I was enthralled, your ending 3 lines cries out from the Soul. Just wonderful Mockingbird....Maria
Login to Reply
Stevenson Avatar
Mockingbird Stevenson
Date: 10/16/2018 10:51:00 PM
Thanks for your kind words Maria! X

Book: Shattered Sighs