The Toymaker

The Toymakers Toy

I thought once Pinocchios strings had been cut, 
his wooden body turned to flesh 
and he became ‘real’

Yet, I have been cut loose from my strings, 
only to be left feeling numb,
and raw? 

I feel as though I have landed, 
like a twig that’s been thrown by a child. 
And am now, Just Waiting
Waiting, to be trodden on. 

I was gifted a voice, 
by the fairy godmother herself. 
But given no volume
Or words to speak.

My ears however, have to listen.
my eyes unable to close,
my control centre never sleeps,
My tastebuds completely frozen.

My vunerable heart,
placed outside of my chest.
With no love or protection, 
Just the echo of my masters voice. 

The clinking of chains 
Secured to my wrists,
clogging My arteries,
And, Starving my veins.

each breath is harder,
like grissle that's been gnawed,
straight off a bone, 
By a ferocious beast.

A broken toy,
with a soul. 
that is wanting to be real.

To find Giuseppe 
and be loved,
not wooden with strings.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Peranteau Avatar
May 13, 2020 at 10:35 AM
....p.s....i have enjoyed your writes! Enveloped them! much love, jamez
Stevenson Avatar
May 13, 2020 at 6:53 PM
Hi James, Thankyou so much for your words of encouragement and support. Have a Happy Wednesday! Big smiles, Mockingbird.
Peranteau Avatar
May 13, 2020 at 8:23 AM
you need to write more, i rarely express this encouragement, yet, i really believe you have the gift of write....i c that you have 2 years distance from sharing your gift hear... not cool denying those who enjoy (after scrounging through the thousands of babblers here) the writes of an au courant scribe! have a great journey...much love. james
Waldrop Avatar
February 4, 2019 at 7:16 PM
I hear and feel the sadness of your heart. You are tremendously skilled at writing your heart. I also hear and feel the passion and strength of your soul within every word written. Showing people how to stand. Very beautiful writing I hope that you will read my Psalms of humidity Facebook page I write to try and help the world around me I would love to know your thoughts on truth and love.
Stevenson Avatar
May 13, 2020 at 6:54 PM
Thankyou for such kind words and support. Big smiles, Mockingbird
J.T. Avatar
December 7, 2018 at 8:44 PM
A poem of such longing; -JT
Stevenson Avatar
May 13, 2020 at 6:55 PM
It is Indeed. Big smiles , thanks JT.
Mcconnell Avatar
October 27, 2018 at 3:05 AM
lovely piece Mockingbird, so well penned with good imagery and insightful thought. Have great day, Gordon
Horsman Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 10:41 AM
To think there are so many broken toys out there in the wide world, yet here, we have one with a soul, and a wonderful intellect, a mind that pushes it's pen to the limit...then to bring all the emotions to the reader,,,This is truly lovely...
Messina Avatar
October 22, 2018 at 2:24 PM
Love this, Mockingbird! Very well written...H x Charlie
Evans Avatar
October 20, 2018 at 7:07 PM
Awesome and oh so aesthetic. There is a tear in these words. A yearning.
Neumann Avatar
October 20, 2018 at 1:42 AM
Sad. I hope the fairground will be finding its way. A voice with no volume, ouch. This is well written, Kai
Pettit Avatar
October 19, 2018 at 4:34 PM
A fanciful write that fascinated me.
Stevenson Avatar
December 3, 2018 at 6:37 AM
Thanks Rob, I appreciate the kind words! H
Andresen Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 8:04 AM
- A great and touching writing, Mockingbird :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Stevenson Avatar
December 3, 2018 at 6:37 AM
Thanks Miss Sunshine! Big smiles, H
Callus Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 2:30 AM
I love the metaphorical beauty of this expressive and emotional poem, M.S. The feeling of longing is strong and sincere. ~ Regards // paul
Stevenson Avatar
October 22, 2018 at 7:46 AM
Thanks for the feedback Paul. I am a big fan of your work so appreciate it a lot. Big smiles, x
Bangalee Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 11:31 PM
Oh! touches me - A broken toy, with a soul. /// beautiful poem
Stevenson Avatar
October 22, 2018 at 7:45 AM
Thankyou for taking the time to stop by and have a read! Big smiles, Mockingbird x
Williams Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 8:55 PM
From beginning to end I was enthralled, your ending 3 lines cries out from the Soul. Just wonderful Mockingbird....Maria
Stevenson Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 10:51 PM
Thanks for your kind words Maria! X
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