The Torn Hearts

I'm inside ride of happiness, an sadness.
I love you so much. but now I know that weren't met to be.
You said once you don't meat your soul-mate so young.
But we believe at 19 years that we do.  How do you know when 
it's your soul-mate. 

Do you feel the love inside.
I ended up pregnant so young. 
that didn't go so good. Our wedding
you told me that I won't leave you.
that didn't turn our good
Because we both broke those vows to each other. 

I sometimes wonder when we still hang out
with our friends do we love each other?
I know in way that I love you but we argued so
much that told me the last time
I can't argue with you my love.
We shouldn't be together  and go our separate ways.

you wouldn't sign our divorce papers.
We argued over those.
Everything we argued over.

When I came back home I expected you to be married and with kids.
that are beautiful and good carrere. you would of made good father.
Your new wife would of been beautiful and made you feel good
about yourself better than I could. 
I sometimes wonder if we could of made it work for each other.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 6/14/2015 12:19:00 PM
- Welcome to P- Soup, Kelli ! - A poem that warms your heart or relieve your pain ... share your own poems here with us - Write poems and send it out into the world, I look forward to your next poem :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/11/2015 7:57:00 PM
Hi Kelli, welcome to this wonderful community of poets. A good write you have there. Looking forward to reading your next poem. Regards, Emi.
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Date: 6/11/2015 2:41:00 PM
Hi kelli, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/11/2015 1:40:00 PM
Kelli, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 6/10/2015 11:52:00 PM
Hi, Kelli. What a sorrowful and wistful first poem- I hope that things work out for the two of you, together or apart. Welcome to Poetry Soup, where you'll find a bunch of jolly nice people to share your work with. We look forward to reading more from you soon. Viv
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