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The Toe Jam Jamboree

Was it his head tilt that stumped me—
Was it his keen variations of hilarity,
Was it his words—wild, strange, free,
Like a bird straight out of captivity? 

He had a frisky, playful tongue
That sounded like a friend
With no limitations save the time span 
Of sixty seconds—
There—none wasted—
No—a wit sharp and full enough
Uttering colloquial meanings I could only dream
To attain through a matter
Of a downloaded app

And yet—he needed only sixty seconds
—on the spit and spot—
To relay inch by inch
A soul so beautiful and rich,
Creative and lovely,
With flawless bite and light

Smart phone readied,
His big toe hit the record button
As he played his tunes,
As he always had
And always will.
He called it the Toe Jam Jamboree,
And I applauded ever so inwardly
With a smile of awed sincerity

Sixty seconds and it ends,
Cut off too soon— 
The limitations of fellow man
And fellow receiver 
Playfully cruel
Ever playing through
Maybe the thick sail of tunes reached my ears
Beyond the time of the app’s snipping jeers

I told him—ever so inwardly, 
His Toe Jam Jamboree was symphony—
Onward with sovereigns in silver harmonies
Reaching a peasant’s light and a warrior’s fight
Straight to a lone cock with feathers too bright 
Beak strong-held high, and sharp
Ready to peck his way out of the coldest of hearts
And into ripples of rhythmic paradise
Where there breathes
The guy who attracted me,
With his tilted head,
His words of glee,
Flipping off every useless ad 
And sifting words and airs like mad 

Toe Jam Jamboree, he called it
And I call it symphony
With a steadied foot
And a readied middle finger
It’s his difference that will always 
Linger

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/30/2016 6:49:00 PM
Its amazing how 60 second affection can last a lifetime Laura...it only takes a moment to revive a heart. I like the mystery and intimacy of your vibrant descriptions, "Wild, strange, and free, like a bird straight out of captivity...Ready to peck his way out of the coldest of hearts." Vivacious love, fresh poetry Poetess...J.A.B. p.s., your new avatar is xool!
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 10/7/2016 3:22:00 AM
Thanks so much, Justin! The one who inspired this poem is very upbeat and inspirational, and it's so so refreshing to meet people like that, since I am quite a melancholy person. ~Laura

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry