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" THE MISSION " MY PHOTO, ©

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There it is, On the screen of my mobile,* A real tiny creature advancing from one corner of The phone to the other. I observe this microscopic living thing: Tiny head Tiny body Tiny legs that are, almost invisible, but Still, they help the creature advance. I wonder What it is? Where does it go? Unfortunately, I have no answers to give So A mystery to me this creature remains, I even ignore its name or even if it has a name, Nevertheless Whatever it is, it parades before my very eyes, Surprising me Puzzling me Confusing my mind. What is it? An enigma certainly for me remains But Whatever it is, there is no doubt that it is God's creation and As such, for sure it has A purpose in life A goal to achieve A mission to accomplish, A mission, no less important, to the eyes of the Lord, than mine For We both come from the same source Thus We both are as much divine Consequently We both work to complete God's Holy design! © Demetrios Trifiatis 02 July 2021 * Yesterday, as I left my mobile on a table in a cafeteria, I noticed the tiny creature I describe above, moving on the screen of my phone and right away I was inspired to write this humble poem and thought it good to share it with you, my friends.

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Date: 7/4/2021 9:59:00 AM
What a perfect poem about God's creation of mankind and our beautiful planet ( which man is intent on destroying), 'All creatures great and small, the Lord God made them all'. Hugs and blessings dear friend, Jennifer.
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Date: 7/2/2021 10:32:00 AM
- Small or large ... everything has a meaning and its task ... a lovely poem, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/2/2021 11:47:00 AM
My very words, my dearest friend, Anne-Lise. Thank you for your precious visit and comment. Hugs xxx
Date: 7/2/2021 8:10:00 AM
I adore this piece; it is in my favorite collection, my dear friend Demetrios. Indeed, there is only one creator who is capable of doing anything, and I believe you know better than I do that, on the grand scale of the universe, Earth is smaller than that tiny creature on your phone. Blessings and best wishes.
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Date: 7/2/2021 11:46:00 AM
Thank you for your gracious and meaningful comment, my dear friend, Lasaad. Yes, we have the same creator, and no matter what our size is, our importance is of equal value in life. Blessings !
Date: 7/2/2021 7:19:00 AM
So true... Every creature is created for a purpose... and may be the tiny creature that was moving on your mobile screen was created and sent to you to shine through this beautiful poetry...
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Date: 7/2/2021 11:35:00 AM
I know that, that is why I wrote the poem, dearest Supraja. Thank you so much for your precious visit and comment. Hugs xxx
Date: 7/2/2021 4:02:00 AM
Another wonderful write, last para should be read by all egoistic humans. I look out for a beautiful picture every day. You are a good photographer. I love flowers. Thanks
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Date: 7/2/2021 11:32:00 AM
Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, my dear friend, Rama. Humility is the message. God bless you.
Date: 7/2/2021 1:06:00 AM
In the big scheme of things when you think of how vast the universe is we are really no bigger than the tiny creature that wanted to make a call lol. Tom
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Date: 7/2/2021 1:11:00 AM
True...and no more important, in God's eyes, my dearest friend, Tom. Thank you for taking the time to visit and to comment. Much appreciated. Blessings.

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