The Tin Man

They said he had no heart at all
they said he felt no pain
The stone-faced man just gave the facts
no feelings would he feign
And then an ancient war broke out
it was one of the worst
The man who was most seasoned
he would report it first

The bullets came from everywhere
small fires raged around
The camera man had focused in
it seemed there was no sound
A little girl had stumbled out
she could have been his own
Her face had blood, her skin torn off
the building had been blown
The girl appeared as in a daze
but still their eyes did meet
Like a classic movie scene 
she limped across the street
She held her hands out to the man
his eyes fixed on the girl’s
A bullet flew and she went down
the blood drenched all her curls

The man stood there in silence
like time had stopped in space
The tin man’s heart had melted
the tears streamed down his face
They said he never was the same
the killing took its toll
They said the shot that took the girl
was lodged inside his soul
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Calasibetta Avatar
April 2, 2022 at 1:41 PM
Your poem although written in 2012 could be most appropriate for our world today . You have beautifully expressed the depth of sorrow and grave sadness that war inflicts on our souls . A beautiful write with outstanding imagery. Kudos, :) Paulette
Salama  Avatar
July 3, 2022 at 12:08 PM
Thank you so much Paulette. I remember I wrote that because it was similar to a scene I had seen in a documentary. I cried as I wrote it. ?? Samia
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
May 24, 2012 at 3:22 PM
War may be necessary in defense of one's country, but not as an act of aggression for the sake of oil or power. This is a well told horror story.
Salama  Avatar
May 24, 2012 at 5:30 PM
I agree with you so much Vince. War to defend a country is one thing but it should not be for aggression and definitely not for oil or power. Thank you so much for your comment. :)
O'Leary Avatar
April 14, 2012 at 3:31 PM
Wonderful, Samia... The sencelessness so vivid... I must read more of yours...Terry
Salama  Avatar
April 14, 2012 at 3:42 PM
Hi Terry, Thank you very much. I really loved your poem. You must write more ...Samia
Salama  Avatar
April 10, 2012 at 4:45 AM
Thank YOU Rockman for your lovely comment. Yes, I guess it is a story for all times, unfortunately ...Samia
Pritts Avatar
April 10, 2012 at 12:39 AM
A heart wrenching story. Not just of todays times but of all times. From the beginning of time. Will we ever learn that death and destrustion will never be the answer? So sad that freedom comes through the price of domination. Let's hope that freedom will always prevail. Great poem for much thought. Thanks Samia. Rockman :-)
Salama  Avatar
April 8, 2012 at 1:46 PM
Hi Ilene, Thank you very much. I'm so glad you liked it!
Bauer Avatar
April 8, 2012 at 1:06 PM
this is very well rhymed and has a beautiful flow. i enjoyed it very much!
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