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The Time Has Come, Our Destiny Awaits

Behold the enemy before our gates Who deign to slit our throats like sheep this day. The time has come; our destiny awaits. We kill or die. There is no other way. Beside us stand our wives and family Whose fate, along with ours, is joined as one. For if we falter, they will never see Again, the rising of another sun. The trumpet sounds, we stand as one to fight; With thrust of spear and pike, with steel and stone, With sweep of sword and taut-strung arrow’s flight Our foes shall reap the evil they have sown. E’en unto death, give all you have to give, Yet do not fight to die, but fight to live. September 22, 2020

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Date: 9/26/2020 5:32:00 AM
Really well done James with a final couplet that cements the entreaty in the hearts of the combatants. thanks for entering the contest
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Date: 9/25/2020 7:23:00 PM
Love the 3rd verse! Congratulations, James!
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Date: 9/25/2020 11:11:00 AM
Congratulations james
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Date: 9/25/2020 8:49:00 AM
The trumpet sounds-great. I agree with Wendy about the third stanza. Congratulations on the placement! Linda
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Date: 9/22/2020 6:08:00 PM
Thank you, Wendy. I wrote this poem this morning after reading one of the PoetrySoup contest challenges. The sonnet does not particularly reflect my own views on conflict and war but serves as an imaginary response to the requirements of the contest. I'm glad you liked it.
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Date: 9/22/2020 12:40:00 PM
James, the very rhythm and sentiment of the title drew me in to read your poem and the interest continued to the end. I enjoyed the whole sonnet with its perfect rhythmic flow and thought-provoking content but I found the third verse particularly impressive.
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