The Tilted Dahlias

On a sage green wall that once wore a blank look,
it dangles helplessly, without a complaint. 
It is slightly askew, with a tilt to the left,
giving the viewer a crick of the neck

Hanging precariously, for an eager assessment
without much annoyance, or an "either" or an "or"
Just a "take me or leave me" 
with a bolder assumption 
that someone will like it, no fear of rejection.

No hesitation came from the hands
that restlessly hung it, with eagerly haste.
He hammered a nail with pride and conviction
and ardently placed it for eyes to embrace

Sharing a warmth of a seasonal decade....
this amateurish, yet delightful landscaped garden
sings in the sunshine, and smelling of springtime
shouting with color, and sprinkled with lavender
flavored with turpentine, and oil-painted rainbows

In the lower left corner, is an array of dahlias,
bursting with crimson, never changing or fading
never thirsty for water,
barren of a single, silent, dried up weed
and free of decay, dismay or mold

Now it is old.........dust to dust......ash to ash
he takes with him the pride he found

...still holding the brush stroke of a satisfied smile 




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Delaney Avatar
May 27, 2013 at 12:33 PM
a wonderful image of a jumbled but pretty garden. Congratulations SuZ
May Avatar
May 27, 2013 at 6:59 AM
congrats on a great win
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
May 27, 2013 at 4:57 AM
Many Congratulations xx
Guzzi Avatar
May 26, 2013 at 7:01 PM
Just wonderful Carrie, as always. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Gildersleeve Avatar
May 26, 2013 at 6:16 PM
Congratulations Carrie. You deserve this first place win. An excellent description of the painting. Warm Smiles, Connie
Ober Avatar
December 14, 2012 at 7:49 AM
Ohhh, I love this! Your descriptions are perfect - I can picture this painting so well in my mind. Congratulations on a very well-deserved win!
Guzzi Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 6:19 PM
What a fine write not sure if this is a wallpainting or wallpaper but it is a beauty. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Brown Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 11:48 AM
Congratulations on your win Carrie. Love, Carol
Gasun Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 8:09 AM
Many congratulations on your win my dear Carrie! love and hugs, Leonora
Williams Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 2:55 AM
Carrie, congrats on your win, I love this...David
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 12:40 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot Carrie love xx
Roberts Avatar
December 12, 2012 at 10:02 PM
Congratulations Carrie.....Seren
Ryerson Avatar
December 7, 2012 at 9:28 PM
Mercy me, Carrie!...Here you go again...'shouting with color'??...'free of decay, dismay or mold'??...What the heck are you trying to do to me?...I'm quite sure you have hatched a cunning plot to break down my defenses...So very thankful and glad to see you writing again...you have been sorely missed - Tim
Palmer Avatar
December 7, 2012 at 10:54 AM
very nice ,great write Carrie
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