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The Thunderstorm (Revised)

When the trees in the bush Are yearning, and the blue Skies are angry; the dark Clouds start to blaze and bark. So when the dark cloud Are roaring… crying out loud, And the dried leaves are drinking; It’s nature that is soaring and singing. The season is singing songs of succor To the plants and flowers that are poor, to men, it sounds like disturbing drums? ...by the terrific thunderstorms.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/21/2010 7:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Paula Swanson's contest "Monsoon Storms" Adeleke. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/17/2010 1:09:00 PM
Congrats Adeleke on your HM in the Monsoon contest with this wonderful write and win so enjoy your sweet honor.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/16/2010 9:54:00 AM
"Clouds start to blaze and bark"-- I love that line!
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Date: 6/16/2010 4:15:00 AM
Well penned picture of a thunderstorm, Adeleke! I like your choose of words in this poem! And thank you for your kind comments, my friend, have a nice day!...Gert
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Date: 6/15/2010 5:51:00 PM
Nice imagery of Thunderstorms! Enjoyed the read~Tirzah~
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