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Written, August 04, 2024
Copyright Protected, ID 04-1663-363-08
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France

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the slowing of life_ eyes stare beyond this world oh, the last gasp ~ then, the silence the thundering quiet a loved person now becomes "the body" the soul has left a stone statue reposes I weep ... my grief forever to be

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Anisha Dutta

Date: 8/17/2024 9:54:00 PM

It pierced my heart. Can’t analyse, if Death is inevitable, why are we attached to so many emotional bonds ! Have Good days.

Constance La France
Date: 8/19/2024 4:06:00 AM

Anisha, thank you for the comment, and compliment, yes it is raw write, very real, Constance

Thompson Emate

Date: 8/17/2024 3:08:00 AM

Oh! This is so touching. Since I lost my grandmother her void is yet to be filled. A nice write, Constance. Well said. A fave for me.

Constance La France
Date: 8/17/2024 10:07:00 AM

Thompson, thank you so much for the comment, compliment and FAV, appreciate, Constance

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 8/16/2024 4:39:00 AM

So sad for the ones who remain. Relating well to the "thundering quiet' myself. The lightning has struck, but the 'thunder' continues quietly as you say, forever. Nice, Constance, well-said.

Constance La France
Date: 8/16/2024 8:15:00 PM

Reason, thank you for the comment and compliment, Constance

Eve Roper

Date: 8/10/2024 9:17:00 PM

So deep and sad, thank you for sharing.

Constance La France
Date: 8/12/2024 1:28:00 PM

Eve, thank you for the great comment, Constance

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/8/2024 9:35:00 PM

Love this one, Dear Heart

Constance La France
Date: 8/9/2024 3:05:00 PM

Andrea, thank you so much for the compliment, Constance

Valsa George

Date: 8/8/2024 1:36:00 AM

Brief, powerful and emotive. When the soul leaves, we become just a 'body'. After my death no body will ask- "When Valsa will be brought home from the hospital". Instead "when will the body be brought home from the hospital". Death is a reality that makes us sad. Great example, dear Constance.

Constance La France
Date: 8/9/2024 3:06:00 PM

Valsa, thank you so much for the beautiful comment and compliment, Constance

Crystol Woods

Date: 8/7/2024 9:45:00 PM

Very real and gut punched... frankly stated but emotional as well. Like the form! When the soul leaves the flesh body you can absolutely see it. The vitality and spark is gone from the eyes. I believe that's why we all understand when they say eyes are the window to the soul. Xoxo

Constance La France
Date: 8/9/2024 3:07:00 PM

Crystol, thank you so much for the great comment and compliment, Constance