The Thunder

The thunder is heard Then the lightening lights up the sky This goes on all night

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/26/2017 12:43:00 PM

- A great haiku, Darlene - I have to admit I do not like thunder - Best wishes for a peaceful evening :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/26/2017 8:03:00 PM

Hello Sunshine Smile. I don't mind the thunder, I like the sound of it. At night when I think the angels are bowling. Have a nice evening my friend. Hugs.

Edward Mccall

Date: 9/25/2017 8:29:00 AM

There's nothing like a good thunderstorm to help you sleep. Another nice little haiku.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/25/2017 8:55:00 AM

Thank you Edward, i like thunder storms, because I sleep better by listening to the sound of thunder. To me I picture the angels bowling. have a nice daymy friend.

Silent One

Date: 9/25/2017 7:12:00 AM

Scary.. I like thunder, many do not though..

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/25/2017 8:57:00 AM

Hello Silent One, you are right many people do not like thunder storms. I like the sound of thunder. Have a nice day my friend.