The Thornbush Incident

My infancy was plagued with several 
accidents 
From the pain of broken bones to the 
woes of tonsillitis 
My vivid childhood could have easily 
been forgotten 
But how can one forget the 
illustrious thornbush incident 

On a sunny Queensland afternoon 
The Brisbane hot sun oozed 
unforgiveness
As it's rays scorched my 
inexperienced scalp
However, one would not predict the 
horror to come

Playing aimlessly in the garden 
I enthusiastically chased man's best 
friend
But this frivolous chase led to my 
own undoing 

A patch of damp grass sent me 
tumbling 
The unsuspecting cactus met with 
my posterior counterpart
Pain like this had never been so 
evident 
Thus the continuous struggle to 
forget the thornbush incident

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 1/19/2016 7:02:00 PM
Daniel, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
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Date: 12/25/2013 5:19:00 PM
Wow Daniel,bet you gained a lot of respect for Thornbushes after that, you made me smile, great write, blessings Carl
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Date: 12/21/2013 5:59:00 PM
OUch! When my son was a little guy we was playing like he was a dog..and licked an ornamental cactus I had on the shelf. That was not fun..lol. Loved your poem. BG
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Daniel Omoighe
Date: 12/22/2013 8:42:00 AM
Lol I sympathise with your son... But now that I think about it, it's a fond childhood memory of mine... Painful but memorable lol
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 12/21/2013 5:59:00 PM
make that he was...
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