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The Thistle's Lament

Those condescending Royals in their pristine garden, primp and preen among the other flowers. Their porcelain pale skin so fragile; they make a wide berth, around me. I feel like a thorn in their flesh, an oddity at best. The stately cedar would not deign to give his daughter to my son, saying she already has a place at the palaces of kings. I bristle for without this lowly thistle, their lives would be boring. Why, they’ll be sorry to find me and my kind honored on the Highlander’s Royal flag. One day, my thorn will puncture the proud, topple them from their high horses. They’ll slow down, their careless stride and fall, as the thistle's prick is pulled from their perfumed and powdered rumps. After: Thistle in the Field, by Fidelia Bridges, 1875 For Debbie Guzzi's Challenge: Ten Pictures, Ten Poems, Ten Days - Painting 10 16 January 2016 * Published by Ekphrastic: Writing and Art on Art and Writing 24 February 2016

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Date: 2/16/2016 9:07:00 PM
Hi Kim, when i read thistle in the title of this one, being Scottish i just had to drop in and i am glad i did, Aye Kim, the lone thistle still standing proud to the end. It may droop a little now and again but it always finds its way erect. It may not be the most beautiful but it is hardy and fool around with it and it has its sting. Aye, the wild country where the thistle grows away in its own peace. Your words a sweet song within my ears. Excellent write. A 7 for this gem Kim....Vlad.
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Date: 1/21/2016 2:57:00 AM
Kim, indeed the thistle is the flower emblem of Scotland, great depiction.. =`) weeee!!! still am waiting for the last two.. =`) finally, am done.. hahahaha!~Olive Eloisa =`)
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Date: 1/18/2016 10:19:00 AM
Truly exceptional work my friend and the ending fits fine . A pleasure to read this delightful interpretation of painting number 10!!!! A7
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Date: 1/17/2016 11:59:00 PM
Now this, I must whistle at this thistle, well done.
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Date: 1/17/2016 6:48:00 PM
Hello Kim ... oh yes, the thistles revenge is paramount now. Well done Kim - Lindsay
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Date: 1/18/2016 5:33:00 AM
Well, I do not encourage revenge, Lindsay. But in the language of flowers, the thistle (like the burr) is an ancient Celtic symbol of nobility of character as well as of birth, for the wounding or provocation of a thistle yields punishment. Consider the herbivore who would eat it, or a person who would trample on it...see what happens, and the thistle did not make any move... Thanks for coming back! :-)
Date: 1/17/2016 5:44:00 PM
I love how you did this one. Makes me think of the royals of France and how THEY were toppled by the peasants in the REvolution. It 's getting time for one in the usa. haha!
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Date: 1/17/2016 12:56:00 PM
Love the touch of humor at the end Kim..Another great write...best wishes
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Date: 1/17/2016 12:25:00 PM
an inimitable write, dear kim... your wildflower can rip off any proud kind.. you rock!..huggs
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Date: 1/18/2016 5:19:00 AM
Hi, Nettie. Debbie and I discussed and agreed that since plants are servants to humans, it is more appropriate to address them, the Royals. I think it came out better. Thanks and huggs!
Date: 1/17/2016 11:14:00 AM
Have you heard the quote..."A weed is a plant whose virtues have not yet been discovered." So applicable to personal behavior this work is in the way you have given a voice to the thistle.
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Date: 1/17/2016 9:35:00 AM
Excellent take on the prompt,Kim.Your research shows,and you have pulled off the poem elegantly.Really enjoyed the write.
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Date: 1/17/2016 6:33:00 AM
nice poem...
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Date: 1/17/2016 5:47:00 AM
Well written and very informative! Good luck, dear Kim!
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Date: 1/16/2016 10:02:00 PM
Nicely written Kim; personally I don't mind the Scotch thistle. The seed attracts goldfinches... but the farmers despise it - good luck Kim - Lindsay
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Date: 1/16/2016 9:33:00 PM
Kim, I love wild flowers and I think toodles are a bit universal in their growth even when the varieties differ. I like that you use the historical significance of thistle.
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Date: 1/16/2016 9:39:00 PM
Thank you, Jaycee. The challenge required a bit of research. I am not normally familiar with all the trivia, but have learned to widen my interpretation of things based of additional information. Thank you so much for your perceptive comment and for appreciating the historical background of the subject..:-)

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