The Test

The Test

A tortured faltering shell I clutch
The heart of radiant night to tread
By vain fingertips untouched
Rare is dark's disheveled head

The pungent stench of sweet decay
Night succumbs with a bitter taste
Must such a delicacy waste?
Or else a ravished heart indulge?

A collar stiff and buttons firm!
As the river laughes in its drunken fits
To all dreams, shameless, boast confirmed!

How often have I lain within
With dust's affinity to dust!
Merciful Lord, my eternal fate
Pray seal from insistent beckoning rust!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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January 3, 2016 at 7:09 PM
Enjoyed
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November 6, 2010 at 9:04 AM
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Brown Avatar
June 1, 2010 at 11:14 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Hyunjin. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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June 1, 2010 at 5:45 AM
This is excellent. I like the flow of the words and the message. Regarding the type of form, you could drop one line out of the third stanza, move that stanza which would be a couplet to the end of the poem, and it would then be a sonnet. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Joseph
Kumari Avatar
June 1, 2010 at 5:38 AM
Good work keep it up
Ra Avatar
June 1, 2010 at 2:29 AM
nice, you have a good imagination, I think you probably have to read this poem a few times before understanding it fully.
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