The Task

The old screen door still welcomes me, a familiar song I've heard before..
But oddly now, it's out of tune.  It has a wail of some despair
After this,...who'll pass this way?
Will they use the rug and wipe their feet, erase away the grime or sleet?
Or will they even care?

I feel my pulse and lungs collide, then take a breath and step inside
I've been asked to come, to clear the house
To organize, and set it right…
But it all seems wrong…. 
To trespass on the throne of life
that was softly lived, behind a gate where thirsty roses bloom and wait…

I hesitate….
to disturb the lace on drop-leaf tables…
Disgrace the quiet of the gloom
To open drawers, snoop and sort, ….a pruning, 
of the good, the used, from worn and torn
My hands are able, but my heart declines..
what isn’t mine, to toss, to find, to mark, and label…

She had lived alone, the last to go, 
one somber dawn, in the old brownstone. 
Without a hint her time was near
But silently, without fanfare, death tiptoed in and closed the door,
beyond the path that brought me here

Echoes of her old straw broom
swept years away from every room 
The dust motes in the window light
now spark and light each memory…
Soft treadle sounds from sewing hems, are recalled by the August wind,
that rattle windows, shaking blooms, in this waning afternoon

There are questions I would like to ask,
but I can’t recall just what they were
No matter now….with no one here
I must keep focused on my task…
Keep sorting, tagging,  tossing, clearing…

How strange it is, how odd it seems,
the last thing found, brown paper bound
was tucked away, and gently loved.
Her china cup, her favorite one, so lovely in my hand,
would last beyond her grave, intact

Long shadows have closed the afternoon.  
A letting go, and a fading sun
My task is done. And I must go
I'll keep the cup, and hold it close
It's a witness to a world unknown

Some fragile things are never gone
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Gelok Avatar
March 6, 2021 at 11:27 AM
I too enjoyed this poem. I found myself helping to gather and pack these treasured belonging...and almost got to know their who once cherished them. Thankyou
Johnson Avatar
March 12, 2016 at 4:19 PM
The greatest poetry that I have read for a long time. I loved it. Love, Joyce
Richards Avatar
March 12, 2016 at 5:21 PM
What a lovely compliment from a friend. Thank you so much dear Joyce!!
Tagore Avatar
March 12, 2016 at 12:43 PM
Wonderful! Your pen has real magic... Hugs, Bobby
Milliner Avatar
March 12, 2016 at 9:31 AM
Carrie, this piece represents the sentiments of many, me included, who was blessed with this same task. Thank you for giving life to our thoughts and memories. Congratulations on a well deserved win!!
Williams Gault Avatar
March 12, 2016 at 5:17 AM
This piece was thick with emotive, tactile expression, we can't help but be swept into the tale. And while there, it brought me back to a time when I had such an honorable task. This was superb, congratulations!
Allison Avatar
March 12, 2016 at 4:30 AM
such an emotional write Carrie many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Carmack Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 4:34 PM
I am glad to see this got first place, congrats Carrie. Well done.
Haight Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 3:05 PM
Dear Carrie...this brought tears to my eyes...how sadly but beautifully you shared your emotions in this poem. A fave for me, because I have somewhat been there too. My heartfelt congratulations to you on your well-deserved First Place win. Hugs, Sandra
A   Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 10:18 AM
Hi, Carrie, Congratulations on your "4 walls" win.... Love LINDA
T  Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 10:08 AM
thank you
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 13, 2013 at 4:26 AM
Hi Carrie, congratulations on your win love xx
Mehta Avatar
December 12, 2013 at 8:01 PM
Congrats on your win, Carrie
Konos Avatar
December 12, 2013 at 12:12 PM
All the poetry submitted was heartfelt. From love throughout life to love in the depths of death with reflections of nature. You are all deserving First Place Winners and I thank you for entering your favorites in my contest.
Jones Avatar
June 18, 2013 at 1:28 PM
Congratulations Carrie...everything you write seemsso familiar to all families I think...this poem especially...
Merryman Avatar
June 13, 2013 at 10:29 AM
Carrie, congrats on your 1st place win with this amazing poem! So much emotion comes through. Going in my favs. Love, Kim
Hicks Avatar
June 12, 2013 at 11:41 PM
Wow, Carrie... you really took me there and made all the memories come to life. It really resonates with me when I think of a person I knew that passed away awhile back... it was an indescribable feeling walking through those familiar hallways that now felt so strange now that she was no longer there... well deserved win, methinks. And thanks for checking out The Taste of a Wish.
Guzzi Avatar
June 12, 2013 at 6:44 PM
It so sounds like the vision of what is to come for me, but without you. :( Congrad's on your verse winning. Light & Love
Puddifoot Avatar
June 12, 2013 at 5:33 PM
a wonderful, poignant piece carrie, I too have had this sad experience and I wrote one about it called 'still life', you have captured the experience so well here, I'm very happy to share the top spot with such a shining talent :)
Dillard Avatar
June 12, 2013 at 12:57 PM
What an excellent expression of deepest feeling in this well thought piece. Sooo,, touching! RAY
Oyewole Avatar
June 11, 2013 at 8:49 PM
Great write and well expressed. Congrats on your well deserved new win. AO
Brown Avatar
October 7, 2011 at 7:29 AM
Congratulations on your win in the "Opened Door" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
Quigley Avatar
October 6, 2011 at 12:02 AM
I knew this was a winner when I first read it. Congratulations Carrie
Ramsdale Avatar
September 3, 2011 at 4:02 AM
A Seventh Place Win Congratulations. CR
Dietrich Avatar
September 2, 2011 at 10:38 PM
magnifcent as always,Carrie. you are a master of free verse. Congrats on the win.
Quigley Avatar
September 2, 2011 at 8:36 AM
Wow. You took me there. Great piece Carrie
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