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The Tangled Tango

Overconfident
practice makes perfect we guessed
tango contest thrill
we moved and were dressed to kill
ending dance in tangled spill





9-1-17

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Susan Ashley

Date: 9/9/2017 8:27:00 PM

Great imagery Cheryl, love the last line! Congrats on your win :)

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 9/9/2017 8:39:00 PM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Susan; win is always a nice surprise!~Che :)

Eve Roper

Date: 9/9/2017 12:34:00 PM

Cheryl, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 9/9/2017 7:25:00 PM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Eve; win is always a nice surprise!~Hugs~Che :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/1/2017 2:51:00 PM

Someone lost their balance. It is a very fast dance. It is easy to get confusedwith the steps. have a nice day my friend.

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 9/2/2017 8:40:00 AM

Never tangoed a day in my life; just in my imagination like in this poem :)~Thanks for visit and have a nice day~Che :)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/1/2017 12:26:00 PM

great humour in the final line Cheryl:-) hugs jan xx

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 9/1/2017 2:15:00 PM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Jan; glad you liked it!~hugs back~Che xx

Mike Hauser

Date: 9/1/2017 12:20:00 PM

Nice!

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 9/1/2017 2:14:00 PM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Mike; glad you liked it!~Che :)

Shari Thomas

Date: 9/1/2017 11:53:00 AM

loved that line ''tangled spill''

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 9/1/2017 12:00:00 PM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Shari; glad you liked it!~Che :)

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 9/1/2017 12:00:00 PM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Shari; glad you liked it!~Che :)

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