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The Tangled Tango

Overconfident
practice makes perfect we guessed
tango contest thrill
we moved and were dressed to kill
ending dance in tangled spill





9-1-17

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Susan Ashley

September 9, 2017 at 8:27 PM

Great imagery Cheryl, love the last line! Congrats on your win :)

Cheryl Hoffman

September 9, 2017 at 8:39 PM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Susan; win is always a nice surprise!~Che :)

Eve Roper

September 9, 2017 at 12:34 PM

Cheryl, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*

Cheryl Hoffman

September 9, 2017 at 7:25 PM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Eve; win is always a nice surprise!~Hugs~Che :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

September 1, 2017 at 2:51 PM

Someone lost their balance. It is a very fast dance. It is easy to get confusedwith the steps. have a nice day my friend.

Cheryl Hoffman

September 2, 2017 at 8:40 AM

Never tangoed a day in my life; just in my imagination like in this poem :)~Thanks for visit and have a nice day~Che :)

Jan Allison

September 1, 2017 at 12:26 PM

great humour in the final line Cheryl:-) hugs jan xx

Cheryl Hoffman

September 1, 2017 at 2:15 PM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Jan; glad you liked it!~hugs back~Che xx

Mike Hauser

September 1, 2017 at 12:20 PM

Nice!

Cheryl Hoffman

September 1, 2017 at 2:14 PM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Mike; glad you liked it!~Che :)

Shari Thomas

September 1, 2017 at 11:53 AM

loved that line ''tangled spill''

Cheryl Hoffman

September 1, 2017 at 12:00 PM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Shari; glad you liked it!~Che :)

Cheryl Hoffman

September 1, 2017 at 12:00 PM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Shari; glad you liked it!~Che :)

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